Mister Stork

In the lounge room of my childhood
there’s this small box made of wood.
And when I open it’s varnished lid
up pops a finely painted stork.
A cigarette wedged in his beak,
with the promise of something good …

“Care to try a Peter Stuyvesant?
Tailor made for the Jet-Set!
You’ve been on a plane.
And you’re a big boy now, all of nine.
You’ll find the taste most pleasant,
and you’ll soon be feeling fine.”

Curious that neither
of my parents smoked.
A dad mostly absent,
who then absconded.
Two much older brothers
with things far more important
than a cold war nuclear crisis.
With idle hands,
and given no grand plans,
I was left to my own devices.
Deep in the groove with a move
known as the Duck and Cover
from a world torn asunder
before there was ever a chance
of getting it all together.

Is there nothing left
but to become
a living protest?
A performance piece
of self immolation?
Mister Stork, I need a snort
of your sweetest,
yet bitter, inspiration.

The proprietor
of the nearby convenience store
would sell me a pack of ten
for the handful of coins
that I had begged,
borrowed, and stolen.
He had a beautiful daughter,
I remember. A friend of my sister.
Years later, he was found
driving aimlessly around town
with the lifeless body of his wife
in the back seat of his car.
No need for fiction
when life is much stranger.

In a neighbourhood
where children could disappear
without a trace . . .
to that whispered realm of overdose.
“Be careful. Be good.
And don’t go too far.”
With spriteful exuberance
and youthful stealth
I would break into the houses
of the rich and infamous
Searching for just a taste
of that ever elusive good life.
And then, there was Mister Stork,
with a hit of loving comfort.
A constant companion
who always made me happy,
if even for just a moment.
Till the day he came up short,
and a beak sadly empty.
With hand painted eyes
he just stared at me blankly …

“You’ve been chasing thrills,
and I can see you’ve got the chills.
You’re becoming quite a scoundrel.
Why don’t you get some
of mum’s favourite pills
and go swallow a handful!”

All done and said,
there is something
strangely liberating
in being numbered
amongst the dead
by friends and family alike
whilst still alive & kicking.

All said and done,
It’s been one hell of a fight.
With Mister Stork,
lurking somewhere in his box.
Always there, but out of sight.
Brooding over schemes yet to hatch,
beyond any doubt.
Beware ever you open that latch.
But he was never a match
for my Father in Heaven.
As I now live
in the ever loving light
of the risen Son . . . Forever and Amen.

~ By David B. Redpath Β© 2019

Photography ;
David B. Redpath Β© 2019

52 thoughts on “Mister Stork”

  1. Most beautiful. Mr.Stork is inspiration
    of your imagination. “In a neighbourhood …
    … he just stared at me blankly … “.
    How much sad things for children and youth.
    Inspirational and thought provoking.
    We should take some steps against Mr.Stork.
    Well done, dear!!
    Oh, most heart touching, all lines.

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      1. A game of shadows
        in the shallows of life.
        As the stork flies high
        we are but running from self.
        Best to close his little wooden box
        and put it back on the shelf.
        He sucks you in,
        only to spit you out again,
        after being well and truly chewed
        With him, your spirit
        is never renewed.

        Thanks for the “Shadow Game”
        inspiration, Rachel ✌️😎

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  2. A profound autobiographical poem, David.

    Truth is indeed stranger than fiction.

    The mysterious Stork in the box of your mind getting you to try cigarettes and then pills.

    This was no stork who delivered babies down the chimneys of rooftops but a stork who ascended up from the furnaces of Hell and delivered lies.

    A compelling testimony to the power of Christ who overcomes demons in all forms.

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    1. Yes Chris, I suspect that Mister Stork
      was an emissary for that Prince of the
      air, despite having his wings clipped,
      and being confined to a small box.
      I wrote this story for all those who’ve
      “… walked according to the course of this world, according to the Prince of the power of the air, the spirit who now works in the sons of disobedience …”
      ( By coincidence, The Sons of Disobedience
      is also the name of a leading Washington
      far right think tank 😎)

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  3. Steer clear
    of that sneaky little stork
    with his box full of snort
    His box full of shiny will put you
    on your hiney
    I like you much better with a blue
    pin upon your lapel
    Of course your last words are the
    most important off all
    Glad you are amongst living
    With the stories you tell
    That I love to read so well
    Wonderful writing David!:)

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    1. Thanks Stella,
      for your words of grace.
      The Word has preserved my soul,
      despite life’s heavy toll,
      in time and space.
      From the fullness of the heart
      words tumble and flow.
      Love is always the answer,
      where hope and faith,
      are allowed to grow πŸ™ 😎

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  4. “One pill makes you larger, and one pill makes you small
    And the ones that mother gives you, don’t do anything at all
    Go ask Alice, when she’s ten feet tall ”
    David, you have an excellent way of making a point. This piece has powerful written all over it. Well done!

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    1. Thanks Anna for the positive feedback.
      Some choose to cruise the heart
      of darkness, Some find themselves
      there, with not much say in it. But there
      is always the choice to depart from it
      … following the light of the Spirit.

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