The bells of liberty
by your stockings rung
The deepest restraints
in my hands … undone
A ladder of splendour
slowly climbing
Your sacrament melting
upon my thirsting tongue
quenched in the ocean
of love’s perfection
Down on bended knees
lost in the tender squeeze
of your wholly communion
To ride the high tide
of hard won liberation
Yet … I’m a captive slave
to your will being done
Angels whispering
a fervent prayer
A cry of pleasure
that rents the air
A rosebud opening
to the dawn
of a new morning
The Sun reborn
like a shining phoenix
arising from the depths
The full moon jealous
of my voluptuous Venus
swooning with the taste
of that sweetest caress
A portrait in the painting
upon a canvas of wonder
the outpouring
of creation unmasked
basking in her pleasure
a forever to treasure
The joy outstretching
to the highest throne
of moistened happiness
Fingers and toes
like tendrils
of warm tenderness
forming a celestial
ebb and flow
from above and below
Ecstasy in the throes
of total abandonment
Heads and tails
greedily reaching
beyond the veil
of this existence
for that Holy Grail
the pièce de résistance
of two souls
pulsating in the unison
of love’s pure bliss
My heartfelt letter
of explosive joy sent
The walls of containment
imploded and spent
upon your arriving
with an enduring spasm
of celestial calm
that spiritual balm
chiming with the ringing
of your swelling charm
Fair land of contentment
wherever my beauty lies
forever binding
those loving ties
Whether near or far
as from the start
you are always here
embedded in my heart
Wherever
our destiny hides
always and forever
true beauty abides
Love triumphant
ever the prize
Lovers together
riding side by side
Our universe unfolding
through whispered sighs
Upstanding and victorious
under curious skies
It is ever a gracious
and heavenly pleasure
as the eagle glides
to be the full measure
in your glorious embrace
where true beauty resides
~ by David B. Redpath © 2018-22
Artwork;
‘Lady Godiva’ (refurbished)
~a watercolour by Savador Dali
Photography:
David & Linda Redpath © 2022
This is the best thing I read this morning. It’s impressive.
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Thanks Ankit.
I know for sure, it’s the best thing
I’ve written this morning.
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It really is. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece, David. 🙂
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That was more than impressive, always inspired by David’s writing
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Greatly appreciated. Thanks for
that most encouraging feedback 🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Alexis.
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WOW! This is truly amazing
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Absolutely amazing piece of poetry and art🏆🌟
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful. Well done.😊 Thanks for the follow😎
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Thank you Mairi.
And no problemo
… my pleasure.
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Thank you for visiting my blog. I’m really looking forward to reading more of your posts. 🙂
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Thank you Marie.
I’m arranging more hours
in the day, to appreciate your your prolific poetry.
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That’s very kind of you David. So many blogs to read … not enough time … 🙂
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Dear David this is lovely! Perfection!
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Thanks Holly.
I have purrfection
with affection
for inspiration.
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Can’t ask for more! Lovely.
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Eloquently written..
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I guess that’s because
I am smitten.
Thank you Graci.
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Your welcome David.
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You’re welcome David.
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I will need to come up with the word more beautiful than the word beautiful to express how I feel for this poem. It’s truly breathtaking. I am so glad I got to read it♥️♥️♥️
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Thank you very much, Sona.
(Celestialitizinglylustrousness
… perhaps ?)
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OMG! Hahaha! I will try to remember that. Thank you
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Beautiful, David
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Thanks BeeZeeGee.
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This was beautiful, I’ve rarely come across no-pun-poetry, and this refreshing sense of Cummings/Merwin reminiscing is very much appreciated. Not only that, you give it a unique touch very much your own, worthy of many praise. Thank you for this.
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Thank you, Johnny.
I very much appreciate your
generous comments.
True love is a gift from above,
how can one not share
in a world full of hatred & despair?
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Dear David, a loving tribute to one so loved. “Love is the drug. . .”, Bryan sings so. Wishing you well. ~ Mia
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Thanks Mia.
Yes, I am hooked and
I managed to score.
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You’re welcome, David.
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And such beauty resides in your words, David. Love this.
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Thanks Punam. It helps
to have beautiful inspiration.
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Thanks for that
( and your recent reminder
to face time our pooch who
we’ve left with friends whilst
on the road … for 3 months!)
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Wow! 3 months. That’s a long time.
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We are travelling through
croc country. They like to
eat small dogs, so relunctantly
we had to leave puppy behind.
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What? Seriously 😐
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Yes.Dogs and backpackers
tend to dissappear up the
tropical north of Australia.
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That’s scary🙄
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More true facts to follow
Miss Terioso. Stay tuned.
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You got me. I am all ears/eyes for the facts☺️
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“deep in my heart
where your beauty resides”
A beautiful choice of words David.
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Thanks Walt.
I’ve read your groove
and you’re pretty smooth,
Tennessee Slim.
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My pleasure sir!
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Excellent poem, David.
I wonder if that watercolour Salvador Dali painted was of the Lady Godiva.
Because that was the first thought that came to my mind as soon as I saw the image.
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Correct Chris. Dali’s watercolours ars usually done in series. This one
was my favourite ‘Godiva’
(I’m very sorry for your loss, Chris).
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Thank you, David.
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I actually thought this was a classic! 👌👌👌👌🙌
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It is now! 😋
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Thanks for that
… sweet Luiza.
Without the rush
of amorous lust
in the arms of trust
life is a bust
and a dried piece
of broken crust.
Hope and faith
. . . in love
is a must.
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I adore this beautiful poem.x
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Thank you, Fiona.
I appreciate that.
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Beautiful!!!!!!
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Thanks for residing, Pankanzy.
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well beauty certainly resides right here in your poem…loved it…
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Thank you very much, Geetika.
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most welcome…
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Truly amazing, nicely expressed. Stay awesome.
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Thank you very much, Manuel.
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My absolute pleasure. Stay awesome!!!
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To encompass that place,
a feat not lightly achieved
but I guess you must have
passed the test, the beauty
flowing through your lines
you couldn’t dig from any
mines.
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Matthias, thank you.
From years digging
for a heart of gold,
there’s no faking
the earth shaking
when love is true.
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I can totally relate. 🌕
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Beautiful x
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Thanks for reading my fairytale
with a happy ever after ending 💛😎
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Absolutely spell-binding… ecstatic… tender… passionate… golden… universal… feelings… hard to express
the extent
of its amazingness…
a true gift
to the WP universe…
thanks for sharing
this amazing
verse
and
this shining
artwork
✨🧡
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On behalf of Salvador Dali, my inspirational long-suffering muse,
and myself, thank you very much
Lia. This piece I was compelled
to write by the power of love ❤️ 😎
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Well… the force is strong
in this one ❤️
Had never seen Dali’s Godiva till now… in short… wow. ☀️
But the poem is truly
a work of art, David. 🔥
Now we can all
enjoy our day
satiated.
💛🔆💫
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Spreading the satiation 💥
a worthwhile mission⚡😎
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I like your creative attitude 👌💥
For its inspiring grace, 🕺💃🏼
All my gratitude. 🙏😘
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Love the painting. Full of freedom and life.
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It’s one of Salvation Dali’s Lady Godiva
watercolour series. I took a sneaky pic
of it when I was in Paris, Kritika 📷 😎
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Awesome photography. 🙂
Have a great day 😀
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Beauty resides in your words David! An excellent example of masterpiece.
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Thank you ecstatically, William.
Greatly appreciated 🙏
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❤ in in you.
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🙏 Lara 🌈 💛
When it comes down to it
true love is the highest gift
ot the Great Spirit ♾️
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Awesome! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, Leonie🙏
My treasured pleasure.
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A very beautiful love poem, David.
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Thank you very much, Chris 🙏
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Whimsical and free. You have a talent i don’t. All I write just sounds achey 😂
Thanks for making my morning smile 🙂
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Thank you ❤️
To ache is human.
Erroneous choices
I find poetically divinyl.
You write such a fine line
of life’s pleasure and pain.
I love to read you once,
and then do it again 😎
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❤️
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Repeat reading! 😊 thank you dear Mr Redpath
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Most lovely and heart touching feelings in your poem,dear Redpath!!
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Very glad you liked this one, Aruna ❤️
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You are most welcome,dear!!
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truly a work of art dripping with love and passion with every word David! Superb stringing of pearls gifting us your heart and inner beauty and inner world within. Superb!💖💖
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A most amorous Thank You
Very Much, Cindy Geogakas 🙏😎
Yes, by providence I am truly
blessed with an easily amused
muse, my High Priestess of Eros 💞
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When I saw the picture at the top of this page, I said to myself that looks like a painting Salvador Dali might have painted of Lady Godiva riding a horse.
And when I looked at the credits later, it turned out I was right.
Very impressive poem, David.
Like a 21st Century version of Solomon’s Song of Songs.
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You have a good eye 👁️ for art,
Christopher 👌🎨
I greatly appreciated your comment
as I am very fond of King Solomon’s
songs. Their very placement in the
middle of the Old Testament refutes
the concept of “Original Sin”, that
destitute doctrine of some old and
bitter (celibate) women hating man.
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Well actually there is Original Sin.
What’s wrong is the idea that original sin is sex.
An idea held by William Jennings Bryan when he was questioned on the stand by Clarence Darrow in the Scopes Monkey trial in Tennessee back in the 1920s.
A scene that was repeated in the play Inherit The Wind where the Darrow-based character of Henry Drummond does the same to the Bryan-based character of Matthew Harrison Brady.
Spencer Tracy played Drummond in the movie version of Inherit The Wind.
That was an impressive scene at the end of the film where Tracy’s Drummond picks up both books- The Bible and Darwin’s The Origin of Species – and holds each book in either hand- balancing both.
You get the feeling that he’s going to discard one and hold on to the other.
Instead he takes both books and puts them in his briefcase.
The first time I saw the film, my mother was still alive.
When he puts both books in his briefcase, my mother noted that Tracy’s Drummond puts the Bible on top of The Origin of Species, “Thus indicating that the Bible is the most important of the two books.”
Something I’d probably have never spotted if my mother hadn’t pointed it out.
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Yes, fathers are more about the
doing, whereas wisdom often
comes from the mothers … but
one needs to carefully listen🗣️👂
When it came to my dad, I may
as well have inherited the wind,
yet my mother was the keeper of
a key to an eternal kingdom 🗝️
For clarification, I was previously
referring to the misogynist doctrine
that equates sex with “Original Sin”.
It arose about the time the role of
women in the early church was
being expunged, and the reputation
of Mary Magdalene was being
trashed by hairy old men 🙈 🙉 🙊
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Beautiful poem and am happy for you and your partner’s love! Also digging the John Hammond song! SO many beautiful things to read and look at and listen to here!
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Thanks for taking time to look,
for beauty is the penultimate
abstract (love being the ultimate
… of course ❤️).
A fleeting glimpse
into a heavenly realm
A place where reality
becomes the dream
A face that disappears
before it is seen
An ideal kept out of sight
obscured by a lack of vision
or simply hidden
and forsaken
in the dark of night
but all too real once revealed
in the bright morning light
Beauty can even shine from
the depths of a broken heart 💔
.
That John Hammond track is
from a favourite album of mine,
‘An Anthology’ (a compilation of
recordings that Duane Allman
played guitar on). I think you’d
like it, Cara.
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I can tell I already do. His voice is nice and gritty. And from what I heard I love the guitar on that ditty.
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Evocative. Sophisticatedly primal. Elegantly poetic. Artistically curated. Humanly experiential by the truest seeker…. Your writing and Dali’s work…
The perfect pairing… congratulations on a fine timeless piece … absolute pleasure to be privy to your work.
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No compliment greater than to
be paired with such a prestigious
painter 🎨 as Dali, Taruna 🌷🙏
It is all a part of the grand celestial
plan when that special someone
says yes after you ask, “Will you
hold my hand?”. To be bold, and
even primal, is a key to ever lovin’
survival in a world gone tribal, and
in dire need of a love revival ❤️ ♾️
(any poetic elegance I possess
I owe to the most gracious love
of my life, A.K.A. the good wife 😎)
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Ahh sweet, superb, even sublime!
Poetically Divine…
Thank you David♥️
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Extremely beautiful David. So tender and heartfelt.
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Thank you most prodigiously
my prolifically poetic friend 🙏
I must confess, Nitin, that I am
truly blessed by providence,
in being enabled to write such
a piece from actual experience.
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It’s a gracious and heavenly pleasure to read you, dear poet. Thank you 💖
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My celestial please, Anita 🙏😇
Thanks for gracing my poetic
existence with your presence 💐
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My immense pleasure,David. Thank you too 💖
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Most deep lovely poem.❤️bless you both🌈🤗🌈
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Much more amore to you, Aruna 🌷
Than you for blessing love’s journey.
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Most welcome with heart❤🙏❤
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As I read, I lost myself in the poem. Truly wonderful in one word!
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Love can be full of wonder 💕
Thanks for taking the trek, Sadia 🙏
I trust you found your way home
alright 😎
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Thanks a lot, David 🙏
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love the unbridled eroticism of this, David, especially the ‘enduring spasm of celestial calm’ 🙂
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I’m not an expert on the subject
(not by a long shot) but I thought
I’d try my hand, John
…. so to speak. Thanks for
the stimulating response 😎
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hahaha; pleasure, David 🙂
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DAMN!!!! Wow. Sigh. Well, alllllrrrriiiiiggghhhttt!!!!! This is about 20 miles past absolutely amazing! Thank You and Your beautiful Muse, my friend!!! 🤗❤️😊
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Grrreatly apppeciated, Kkkaty 😎
Yes, without my lovely Linda 💝😋
I would be a pizza 🍕 without any
topping … a pie with no pastry 😢
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😂❤️🤗🤗🤗!!!
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David, your verses remind that there can be much to life that so many miss out on. Since retiring, I see more of where this lasting beauty resides.
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Yes, true passion can be sadly
ground down to nothing when
running a race ( unless it’s the
race of grace). My best advice
is to retire early, and retire often,
to allow space for romance 😎 💞
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You beautiful people, you…
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Thank you blushingly, Bojana 🙏😎
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Hugs back
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