Down to sleep
their souls to keep
Vulnerable
innocent and meek
Somewhere
below life’s glitter
pure evil seeps
from a broken gutter
grim trauma to reap
Innocence shattered
beyond all hope
as mothers weep
Watch out now
Take care
Beware
Given enough rope
all things dark
and fearful
… into the deep
Tell me it isn’t so
down below
where the siren sings
a hand pulling strings
Through the madness
I glimpse the enemy
seething
in a hatred burning
for all humanity
The young and the old
the slave and the free
Subjects all since the fall
to a ruling tyranny
Under a blazing sun
Under the gun
Religious divisions
of endless hostility
Knives and bombs
in the hands
of young children
Better a rock
tied to the neck
Preachers of hate
masters of fear
lords of war
… all into the deep
Only stardust?
Are we golden?
Lonely
tarnished and broken?
Compassion lacking?
Truly nothing lost
… for good
All things to gain
Rock solid
the holy mindfulness
that keeps me
totally sane
Jesus loves me
Yes, this I know
Absolutely
His grace
his mercy
that loving taste
of heavenly serenity
His presence
surrounding me
Some things seen only
through the eyes
of eternity
For goodness sake
my soul to take
back to the Garden
Loving kindness
like a forgiven mistake
The thrill of life
playing
exploring
with great excitations
All things bright
and beautiful
Those Good Vibrations
of a Universe unfolding
Like a nurturing Mother
Expectations rewarding
of a Father loving
Anticipation
truly
surely
the Prince of Peace
needs be returning
How long?
For they are weak
and to Him they belong
Watch out now
Take care
Beware those
who in darkness reap
Cellar dwellers
lacking character
In broken weakness
blaming it all
on their corrupted nature
Yet He is strong!
The One
and only true hope
their souls to keep
Omega predators
war mongers
slave traders
and religious deceivers
bottom feeders
of the shallow
and stagnant waters
all monsters that creep
destroyers of innocence
malignant tools and fools
aboard a sinking ship
given enough rope
… now into the deep
~ by David B. Redpath © 2017 – 2021
Photography:
David B. Redpath © 2019 – 2020
Superb, as always.
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Thanks for that.
I’m on the beaten track,
stomping across
the Australian outback,
so l pulled this one
out of my backpack.
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Into the deep my soul shall creep
For the Bible told me so
i guess i died before i woke
The deep now has me by the throat…
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A change is as good 👍
as a holiday, Walt 😃.
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Aye! Indeed it is!
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Someday let me travel with you, in pictures. 🙂
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I’m thinking a picturesque tommorrow.
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I love it
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I’m carrying a compass
to prevent any errant choices.
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lol. I know how that is!
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I have been known
to go a bit errant.
Perhaps my compass
needs a service?
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given enough rope, a man called ove thought he had enough but then it broke. your poem reminds me of him, trying so hard but never arriving.
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Thanks for that, Gina.
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Very good!:)
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Thanks Stella.
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“Only stardust?
Are we golden?
Lonely
tarnished and broken?
Compassion lacking?
Truly nothing lost
… for good”
Feels
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… Crosby Stills & Nash
(not forgetting Neil Young)?
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This moved me intensely David. “Some things seen only through the lens of eternity.” Yes, but heaven should be here and now also. And it is in humanity’s hands to bring in the Good Kingdom
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Thanks for sharing that, Lorraine.
Yes, to express the anger …
Who is ‘Mr. Duplicity’, bearing responsibility?
Deity, humanity, or both
simultaneously?
“And I’m here,
to remind you
Of the mess you left
when you went away.
It’s not fair, to deny me
Of the cross I bear
that you gave to me
You, you, you oughta know.”
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That is always the question isn’t it David. Whose responsibility is it. Some could say it is God’s for even putting the apple there. And then of course, we get all the arguments about freewill and robots. I wonder what those who live in lands where people are murdered daily would have to say about this? If of course they even could think of it when of necessity so preoccupied with grief and striving.
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No divine intervention
required. Man has always
been more than capable of inflicting violence, slavery,
suffering, and poverty upon
his fellow man.
‘Quality of Life’,
is a modern concept.
‘Standard of Living’
is the game
Always higher is the aim.
Western materialism
spiritually bankrupt.
Is theology a luxury?
Man has the potential already to solve all the
the world’s man-made
problems.
The Sermon on the Mount
is a great start.
We have already the intelligence, the technology,
and the imagination to
avoid the looming tribulation, born of
selfishness and tribalism. In disunity there is no blessing.
The will to overcome and
rise above is missing.
For me, theology is
meaningless religion, without the personal touch
of Jesus Christ.
To seek first the Kingdom.
One day, all will be concise
and clear. In the meantime
… hope, faith, and love.
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Absolutely David. But who wants to? Not the majority because many only want their own power. But again this is often because of weakness and insecurities. Yes God made this world and saw that it was good. Sadly it got messed up. But without that free will what would we be? Complicated questions I suppose David. I agree theology might be seen as a luxury.
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David, where does that quote come from that you made at the end of your reply to me. I would like to read it if it is a poem
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As you may have noticed,
BeeZeeGee, I am often
guilty of taking song lyrics
out of context. I quoted
from Alanis Morissette’s
‘You Oughta Know’.
I just like the rage she
compresses into that song.
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Oh thanks David. I like hearing of new songs. I will listen to it. I am a dunce lol. I keep missing people’s comments and replies to my comments Ha! Duh! Yes though, faith, hope and live. These three REMAIN. We lose hold of them very often, but then we always return to them. God bless you David. Enjoy your trek!
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Thanks for that, Lorraine.
May God bless and keep
you always.
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And you too David
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I love this poem David with its combination of lines from old hymns and lines from contemporary pop songs.
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Thank you, Chris.There does seem to be a D.J.
in my head doing the mix.
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Very touching and beautiful
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Thank you very much, Precious M.
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Powerful piece.
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Thank you very much, Mere.
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Beautiful Photoart
by someone who’s so smart.
Your poem breaks my heart
as it makes me feel part
of a story so sad;
all wars are truly mad.
You combine many things
that give your poem wings
of a powerful piece
for a wish of world peace.
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Thank you muchly,
Marta.
To sorrow one must not
become a martyr.
For in this broken
forsaken world
there is always more
just around the corner.
So I say today we need
much love & laughter.
And sorrow can wait
till tomorrow.
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Yes, very true.
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By the way, my last post is a review I wrote about a friend of mine’s book. My intention is to get him a few more readers as this friend has helped me so much. I think he is a very good writer who deserves more recognition (probably like you all). Perhaps you could check out this post? It means a lot to me, much more than all my humble writing attempts.
Here is the link: https://momentsbloc.wordpress.com/2018/07/10/a-review-of-this-way-to-the-end-a-book-by-mario-savioni/
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No problemo, Marta.
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Thank you, David.
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Back to the garden, this good vibrations… Is he to return? I have bad news to tell…👌
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Thanks Luisa.
Good News
Bad News
Always the
Fake News
to pick & choose
… only time will tell
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What a lovely poem 🙂
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Thanks for reading, Neha.
Very glad you liked it.
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My pleasure 🙂
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to Him they belong…And in Him may they keep their faith…no matter what…lovely poem…
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Yes, indeed.
Thank you Geetika.
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welcome…
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I often think of “better a rock…”. How accomplished humans are at creating hell on earth.
Great post!
(Also, I thought I had started following you a while ago, but wasn’t seeing any of your work. WP has been an interesting experience for this non techy mind 🙂 )
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Capital Ditto, Vanessa.
I’m a Technophobe, who
regularly loses sites?
I’m sure the savvy social medians think I’m quite rude!
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I am totally blaming WP glitches.
😁
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Of course it is!
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Gentle yet powerful. Amen!
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Thanks for that.
Yes, He will be back
… so be it.
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Inspiring to read
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Thanks for taking the time, Mairi.
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Echoes of nursery rhymes and 1960s rock anthems. Well done.
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Thanks Anna.
I did listen at kindergarten.
And yes,
there was ‘Rock’ theme.
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Great post
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Thank you, Kyle.
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Forceful and eloquent. I enjoyed this very much.
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Thank you 💛 Much appreciated.
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Always welcome 🙂
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Quite a deep one , you are, aren’t you , Little David Goliath.
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Thank you Yassy,
thy bonnie lassie.
That title suits me just fine 😎
Both Hebrew royalty
and a giant Philistine.
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David, you are destined
For all things, pristine
I honestly believe
Your highness can never deceive
A true blue blood
you are
That’s what , I and my mind perceive
Bravo, Redpath !!
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Dearest Yassy,
I know not what to say,
but that there be
a heavenly Monarch
from whom
best not to stray.
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Dearest David
words fail me too
I know your good heart will never stray
For you , I will earnestly pray
You take good care.
Carpe omnia!!
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May the Great Spirit be with you, Yassy 💛 on
your journey to the living heart of Mindfulness.
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Spoken like a true man of peace.
Thank you buddy buddy. May you be too, spirit and all !
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Enchanting and dreamy. I expect nothing less from you xxx
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Thank you muchly, Fiery M ❤️
of high and great expectations 😎
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My pleasure always xx
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“Omega predators” excellent line! Thank you for this poem. I will be back here to read more of your writings. Kenza.
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Thanks Kenza 🙏
You’re welcome back anytime.
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Outstanding! There are so many great lines and understood. Impressive!
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Thanks for the positive feedback 🙏
Much appreciated 💝
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You’re very welcome. Your living truly shows in your writing. Very nice.
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This is wonderful! Keep up the good work😊👍
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Thank you! Much appreciated, E.W. 💝
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It’s time to rise up David.
The Science & Religion SCHISM is going to be breached.
Lots of Love
Sibyl X
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It seems to me, when science
is approached with an open mind,
it whispers gently … “Grand Design!”
An ear to hear, loud and clear 🙏
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What a beautifully written and powerful message. The juxtaposition of the Lord’s Prayer intertwined with atrocities of the darker shades of our world is not lost but on display in this poem. Wow!
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Thank you very much, Kevin.
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The pleasure was mine! You’re very welcome!
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Excellent!
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Thanks for reading, Peter.
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Awesome lines with Jesus’s image.most impressive post,dear!!
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Thank you very much, Aruna 🙏
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You are welcome,dear!!
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Prosaic! I feel His grace more and more. I love the image, too!
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In case of a prosaic outbreak
just call for Doctor Poetic 😎
Thank you Barbara . . .
Love without truth, just a heartbreak.
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Man, you’re good! As much with the pen as the camera!
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Thank you Super K of the 4 R’s 🙏
(When I went to school there were only
three R’s. But you’ve managed to add
one extra random R! Well done 👏)
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Hahaha, thanks, David! 😊
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But hey, Rants Ruminations and Ramblings also equal to just 3R’s! 🤔
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Never be without the randomness!
Without the random ramblings . . .
you just end up stuck in a rut 😎
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Ha, you’re a funny guy… I like that! Cheers, mate!
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Ahhhh!! Yes! 🙏🏻
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Thank for partaking, Nina 💛
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Absolutely, David. When word sting—they stun. And that’s the truth! 💓
How is Cat Black?
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Sadly, Lindy has forbidden me from
having a kitty. Too much native
wildlife around here. And cat’s get
the munchies. So instead I have
a black miniature caboodle, the
size of a cat. But it thinks it’s a
Minotaur, and trys to make trouble 😎
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Haha! Well, Lindy is right. Kitty makes for good snacking…but then you could have a kitty and caboodle…🙃
We also have a small black terrier/whatsit that thinks she is a big black wolf—fierce!
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Yes, no amount of selective breeding
can supress that inner wolf 🐺 …
and that includes dogs 😎
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Don’t forget dingos
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You forget about dingos
at your own peril around
here, Nina 🐶
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Right! They also get munchies.
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Excellent, David.
Yes, beneath where the siren sings, all sorts of interesting creatures.
Brought to the surface again by all manner of Omega predators- in politics, the military, film, music and in clerical robes.
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Thank God there is a slow train
coming, up around the bend 🚂
This world is menagerie, but all
things come to an end 🙏
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Wow!
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Thanks for the Wow, Janet 🙏
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You’re welcome! Would have said more but I was rendered speechless. 😯
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Being a mime artist,
I often have that effect 😎
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This is VERY intense, in a good way. I’ve always meant to ask, how long does it take you to write one of your pieces?
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Thank you interdimensionally
intensely, Resa 💫 ♾️ 🙏
Sometimes they arrive promptly,
with a little prompting. This piece
was a while ago, so I’ve had time
to tinker and panel beat it a bit 😎
In all of creation I always find
that seeking the Great Spirit is the
very best source of inspiration ✝️
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Very cool! 🙏
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Starting my day reading this reading this outloud. Coffee in one hand, heart pounding out of my chest. I hope You realize this is a huge compliment…I’ve always wanted to say it but didn’t want to offend You or to sound ignorant…which I can SOOO be!!! 🤣But one of my favorite poets is Anne Sexton because NO MATTER WHAT she is talking about (and oft times I have NO idea) she carries my heart, soul and emotions on a journey. I find myself laughing or crying or heart pounding or feeling shoved to the ground or lifted high…I have never tried to understand what she was talking about when her words are too much for my brain because my body/soul understands what she’s saying. She’s magical to me. And Your poetry is the same experience. Just epic and driving and joyfully carrying everyone along for the ride!!! I read Your words outloud and it’s “All Aboard!!!” Thank You for resharing this and for All You share!!! Cheers!!! 🤗🌀🌟
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I like the last stanza in particular.
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Of goats … and sheep. For those
in wolf’s clothing, Is it ever
too late to don that golden fleece?
Thanks for reading, Liz 🙏
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My pleasure, David!
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Brilliant!!
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Thank you belongingly, Wanda 🙏😎
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You’re welcome
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Deeply moving to those of us waiting for the Lord in his time but a lot of ugly all around, spinning. Yet there are some beautifully kind people to that have faith. Strongly worded and well said my friend. Love 💕 Joni
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Thank you very much, Joni 🙏 😎
Yes, there is a slow train coming,
up around the bend. But there is
much chaos and heartbreak to go
down before the King comes back
to town. Thankfully, can wear a hopeful
smile, rather than a fearful frown ✝️
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You could surely be right my friend. I am hoping sooner rather than later. “Mark 31 Heaven and earth will pass away, but My words will never pass away. 32 But as for that day or hour, no one knows, not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son, but only the Father.
“Great poem”
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🙏 ♾️ 💛✝️ 😎
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David, you should make a poetry book.
I would love to see this incredible and brilliant poem on a book from you.
Incredible writing as always. 🙂
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Thanks Charlie 🙏
The Book of Love 📖
has already been written
upon the hearts
of the poets, the artists,
and lovers,
since the dawn of creation
seeking a taste
of that celestial perfection
The only question …
Who wrote the Book of Love❓
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You are welcome David.
Interesting question: Who did?
Was it someone before man?
someone from the universe?
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According to ancient Hindu script,
man made the gods.
I am convinced, beyond question,
that the great I Am, beyond space
and time, is where it all began.
Like a supreme poet, he bespoke
this existence. There’s a musical
echo of that voice reverberating
across the Universe
(the astrophysicists have heard it).
And I’m certain there’s a grand plan.
The quest majesté is to seek it.
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Man made gods do call upon,
do they listen?
Has beyond not heard the cries?
Has eternity not refreshed the questions?
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Love is the question
that requires answering
Love is the answer
There to be questioned
Sowing and reaping
Idolatry lost
wilderness wandering
All washed up
by the Rivers of Babylon
Time standing still
A lost generation
signs and wonders seeking
The scenery is ever changing
No greater love
The divine example given
The Word spoken
echoing throughout
the alleyways of oblivion
the whisper of Salvation
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SHARING IN CHORES AT HOME IS ONE THING—-WORKING TWELVE HOURS A DAY IN UNSAFE CONDITIONS IS ENTIRELY ANOTHER!!!!
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It is shocking that child labour is
still an issue in the 21st Century.
Despite all of our technological
advances, slavery is still a large
component of the world economy.
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and kn rfos country.
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133 COMMENTS—OFTEN IN DEPTH—SHOW THIS A GREAT POEM TO CHEW ON!
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This is really powerful. Thanks for sharing it with us, David.
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My pleasure 🙏
To truly care, to try one’s best …
to be a thread of human kindness
in a world threadbare with dispair
… humanity at it’s finest.
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a powerful polemic, David; yes the teachings of Jesus and the Buddha have much to recommend; I redcall Jesus’s wrath against the tax collectors: He would be outrages against peddlers of child labour —
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Jesus did say to do unto others as
you would have them do unto you ☑️
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yes, he did; I’m sure Jesus and the Buddha, if contemporaries, would have got on famously 🙂
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Love thy neighbor does have
a very Buddhist flavour 🤔
Love your enemy is going to
the extremity.
I have a problem even liking
our local politician. He’s was
probably a lawyer, or possibly
a used car salesman 😎
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Lol 🙂
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I love all the theological implications in this poem. It is true the scum always seems to run beneath the fresh water! Well done.
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Thanks Dwight.
One sweet day . . .
“But let justice roll down as
waters, and righteousness as
a mighty stream.”
~ Book of Amos
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and quoted by MLK! :>)
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Sadly, despite all our promise, we are far from golden. Sin has corrupted our nature. For that reason we are in desperate need of a Savior in the Person of Jesus Christ.
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In a world of brokenness ,
Jesus Christ is wholly and solely
the path to wholeness.
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Innocence shattered seems to have become the norm. Our only hope is in Christ.
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A traumatised wounded spirit
is the main aim of the enemy’s
diabolical game.
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I really like your take on the child’s bed time prayer… yes, the siren song of evil is always out there calling us astray!
Dwight
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Could it possibly be
that some things
you thought you knew
were true . . . but
on a whole other level
Babylon is the mother
of mysteries
Theology
Philosophy
The truth is simple
In Christ Jesus
the invisible God
made visible
But then . . .
people do love a carnival
in the endless search
for divine perfection
The complexity of chaos
wheels within the spirals
of perpetual motion
Creation and destruction
As for me … I know
absolutely nothing
but Christ’s manifestation
crucifixion and resurrection
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