Upon a Dragon’s Breath
(and the Persistence of Grace)
This existence
an enigma
A never ending search
for perfection
all wrapped up
in a shroud of destruction
From a mirror shattered
humanity’s bloodied
and battered reflection
There’s a toxic cloud
in mass production
suffocating
A slow seduction
locked in the arms
of a downhill spiral
Life and death
riding the trail
upon a dragon’s breath
Death or life
within a dragon’s breath
Scaling the heights
plunging the depths
Somewhere
between fear and hope
a relationship
of love and hate
upon a prayer wheel of fate
Rocking the road trip
aboard a sinking ship
on a magical swirling trip
Like the warm embrace
from a lingering wraith
forever searching
for a landing strip
The fall out
of trouble and strife
the twist and shout
The seesaw
within a revolving door
God only knows
What’s it all about?
You gotta give me more
before I’m out for the count
What exactly
are we here for?
Living the bread
with the quick
and the dead
The cold earth calls me
It’s gravity heavy
… heavy like lead
As the soul is stripped
and the body bled
Sliding off the scale
onto a mortuary slab
Trying hard not to inhale
that dragon’s breath
Life or death
upon a dragon’s breath
Dust off my shoes
locked and loaded
with those earth bound blues
Where nothing is ever enough
Leaving far behind
the rust and burnt crust
of the deaf and the blind
by the choices they choose
when love is a bust
A broken heart to bind
with a final thrust
of pills and booze
The short and the tall
But what of the very small
who had no choice?
No choice at all
Lost in the nursery crime
of space and time
since innocence took the fall
and pride learnt to crawl
across the keyboard
of your mind
Held tight in a trance
like the fiery embrace
of a dragon’s breath
Holiness defiled
like trash in a can
Truth defined by those
who don’t understand
Four sheets to the wind
as the sins of the wolf
smeared onto the lamb
As if by plan
Truth found guilty
for not making a stand
A gun still smoking
in the deceiver’s hand
Fake good news flowing
throughout the land
It’s length and breadth
tainted with that stench
of a dragon’s breath
Is it Truth?
How clearly do I see?
“God is Love”…
the word that I’ve heard
keeps on telling me
Even to love my nearest
and dearest worst enemy
Your words of love
like a regal hand
holding a Royal Flush
May that first
taste of grace
that lingers from birth
not be a waste
Like all the hot air
of a dragon’s breath
This broken existence
always in crisis
Always seeking an exit
The peril existential
Never forget
true grit
is in the Spirit
That pearl of great price
beyond all flesh
taken with persistence
on the insistence of faith
With all mercy and grace
fulfilling the void
of your personal space
Between a rock
and a hard place
that Kingdom within
Life is for living
Breathe it in
Surrender
or resistance?
Beyond sugar and spice
Held firm in the vice
of some religious device
and all things men call
… Paradise
No comparison
to the Garden of Creation
Submission to superstition
and iron age tradition
should never be
the only option
in a nation
where the worst curse
is in motion
No night flight
to Jerusalem
The Den of Thieves
is back in town
Yet the door of peace
is always open
Going into orbit
and breaking free
of this world’s
heavy duty gravity
For the children of light
the light years
but an excursion
The Regal in full flight
upon the wings of an eagle
Empowered by the might
of a love resurrection
Death and life
overcoming the strife
Life and death
and all the rest
Unity in creation
Heaven blessed
Living this life
upon the crest
of a Holy breath
A cool change coming
in the light of morning
Lighter than air
and under full sail
I’m on love’s trail
I’m over that big dry kiss
The kiss of betrayal
Getting with the Spirit
The Highest
and the Most
The toast of humankind
Jesus Christ
The host
of this very existence
With that scent of grace
exclusively heaven sent
Godly
Richness
At
Christ’s
Expense
Goodness graciousness
Born upon a heavenly breath
~ by David B. Redpath © 2017-2020
Angelica saved by Ruggiero’
~ by Jean-Auguste-Dominique Ingres
‘St. Michael’ ~ by Raphael
‘St. Michael Vanquishing Satan’
~ by Raphael
‘St. George’ ~ by Raphael
Photography:
David B. Redpath © 2017-2020
Absolutely amazing:) I enjoyed reading this. So many great lines.
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Thanks for that, Stella.
I wrote it last year after a
good friend was diagnosed
with cancer ( he’s since got
on top of it, hopefully ), so I
had some extreme inspiration.
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You’re welcome. I’m sorry but I’m glad he’s on top of it. Cancer is terrible.:(
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Thanks. He’s fighting fit
now, and on the fiddle 🎻.
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That’s wonderful! I love the fiddle, stringed instruments are big in my family! 🙂
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There’s plenty of pluckers
in my family 🐔, Stella.
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You leave me amazed every time David. My mind is boggled. You are a great poet.
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Thank you very much, BeeZeeGee.
I really appreciate that.
When my mind is in a boggle
I simply apply a toggle.
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Lol. I saw that this came from a very serious subject though. It is good
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You had me at dragon. Excellent write, David!!
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Thanks Dorinda.
I know how fond you are of dragons.
I promise, none were harmed
in the writing … except perhaps
their feelings?
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You’re welcome, David. Yes, fond, as long as they don’t scorch me 😉
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This felt like an epic battle as I read it. It’s extraordinary. I am in awe of the way your words twist and flow and mesh and the way your mind works!
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Thank you very much, Susan.
I guess some good has come
from all the years of rerouting
neural pathways.
Not to mention those
dearly departed brain cells
… so I won’t mention them.
Susan, I am
a great admirer of your writing,
and your courage in the telling.
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The feeling is entirely mutual!!!! Thank you, David! And, yes, we don’t need to talk about the dearly departed brain cells……time gives us so much to occupy the gaps.
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A fitting eulogy for mind over grey matter.
Well said, Susan.
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So many different phrases… Many memories generated… Words upon words… Like a magic carpet ride through inna-gada- davida! Awesome sauce here David!!
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Thank you muchly, Walt.
Twas a labour of love,
that had me jacked in.
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They have Iron Butterflies
. . . in Tennessee?
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Of course, but they play banjos and fiddles ☺
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😍
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This is so complex, as your poems often are. It would require quite some effort to comment on all significant points. It’s a pity i won’t do it justice. It is so existentially riddled! Love the questions posed.
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Thanks Luiza for the observations.
A seeker of Truth needs to question everything.
I appreciate you taking the time for reading.
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The part where you talk of true grit is in the spirit. It is that need for discomfort. We hate discomfort and seek the opposite. But without it, we don’t move. In general. 🙌👏
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As Plato expounded, we are seekers
of perfection. Always looking for the
true order of things. It’s a side effect
of being human.
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Interesting. Love when someone revives Plato. Next time my perfection drive kicks in, I will remember this. And that reminds me of a classic, now cliche, Nietzsche’s quote about needing chaos for a star to be born! We seek perfection but chaos can create perfection or order or beauty, in some ways. I’m learning to let chaos drive the horses sometimes.
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Stephen Hawking pointed out
the need for some disordered
chaos in the universal creative process.
And Pablo Picasso stated
that “creation is destruction”.
Hopefully in an artistic fashion.
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With those names.. We rest our case.
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Living the bread… The earth calling you. There is so much just here. I can read the influence of righteousness and the church. Being a good citizen and living the rat race life. Well, at least this is my reading. You are very very talented. Glad to have “met” (ha, the virtual world) you.
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I think any self respecting church would
have put a fatwa out on me. After being
excommunicated by the Hell’s Angels
for being less than 1% pure. At least they
can’t get me in cyberspace. So we are
safe here, Luiza . . . I think?
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Hahhaha i don’t have the sarcastic gene so it’s hard to tell how much of it is banter and how much of it is true?! Haha. Why not? Being a saint or a sinner. We all are. Ha cyperspace. Funny, I’ve been seeing the world from the alien spectacles.. And this fits well, for the virtual world is where alien meat, meets. 🙌🖖
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Luiza, I fix a pair of Alien
Ray Ban Wayfarers to my
face with a spirit level.
Keeps them firmly in place,
when blasting off to
cyberspace … and beyond.
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Hahahaha deadly. Same here. These are my regular goggles. Ha. Keep seeing these glowing fluorescent colours.
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I’ve always loved the way you’re able to mix biblical themes with pop cultural and mythological references in your poetry.
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Thank you very much, Christopher.
As a mixmaster in the word
kitchen, with your writing proof in the pudding,
the universe provides all the ingredients required
for a gourmet pot stirrer.
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This is amazing David. The layers and the references…one read can never do justice to what you whip up in your word kitchen.
And not forgetting the pics!
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Thanks Punam, for taking the time
to read, and your kind comments.
I like to use artwork that I’ve stood
infront of, and mind melded with.
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Yes, I have gathered that you use a lot of artwork in a very interesting way.
It is always a pleasure to read your works, though I must admit my simple brain takes time to understand all the allusions to music, physics, myths and the like.
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Thanks for your patient persistence, Punam.
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That I have in abundance. 😀
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This is the third time I’ve read this poem. You’re a gifted writer, but that’s not why I came back. It touched my heart. It’s beautiful — the entire poem, the photographs, the love and anguish for your friend. I’m glad he’s going to be okay. I walked that path, came back into the light too. It changes a person. To have someone witness this terrifying time with such eloquence; to know they are willing to be open to pain with you; to know they’ll walk with you through it all — that must have been such a gift to your friend. And now this poem is a gift to everyone. Thank you. ♥.
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Thanks for that Niki.
Yes, my friend is now much
improved, from what was a
dire forcast.
I know you’ve been through
much, in this rich and tangled
tapestry called life, so I greatly
appreciate your comments, Niki.
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Rich and tangled indeed. Thank you, David. ♥.
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An epic poem David. Enjoyed the art too but I admit, I always liked the Dragon.
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Yes👍, Big H.
In defence, tis not what
the poor Dragons do.
It’s the offence,
at their expense,
by some who come
branded with fire 🔥
and a sad bad tattoo.
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Tis true
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Anna.
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Inspired and inspirational. Thanks for sharing your gift!
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Thank you for joining
in on the journey.
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Who are you? You are talented.
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Thanks for reading, Cindy.
I’m just someone who’s seen
a fair share of this life, and
made notes along the way.
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Most lovely lines with beautiful photos.dear!!enjoy your trip.
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Thank you, Aruna. We’ve been
having a wonderful adventure.
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Enjoy dear.i like too adventure.🌹🌹🌹🌹
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My Lord, David. Your words are a Great Slayer….my mind, once again is completely blown. Thank You for this. ❤️
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As ever, my windswept pleasure
Katy 🙏🌀🌪️😎
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🌝
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♥️
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💛🐉
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Cool! I’ve always had a fascination with dragons.
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I do too, Rachael 🐉
But I found out the hard way
it’s better to photograph them
than ride them. Unless you’re
Daenerys Targaryen.
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Or the Vikings in the How To Train Your Dragon movie trilogy.
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When it comes to the chase 🐲
you’ll never beat a dragon in a race.
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Amazing artwork and words shared by a outstanding writer.
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Gracias, Señor Coyote 🙏
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You are welcome David.
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This was amazing my friend.
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Greatly appreciated, John.
I tried my best to tip the scales
with this one, so to speak 🐉 😎
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You did David. It was amazing.
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I could see this poem in a literature anthology, there is so much here to discuss and explicate. Very impressive.
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Thanking you immensely, Liz.
Just trying to get it real, with
a flight of midnight fantasy 🎇
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My pleasure, David! I enjoyed being a passenger on that flight.
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Most beautifull written, Dear Redpath.
At last, love gets victory over the hate.
I think all paintings are related from
the chuch of Barcelona. Right dear?
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Thank you very much, Aruna.
The pictures were taken from all oved
the place. Most of the paintings I
found at the Louvre in Paris🗼😎
But some of the religious pics were
taken in Spain.
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Most beautiful.👌
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An amazing creation as always. I always read them as a song. 👌
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Thanks for singing along 🎶
Kritika 🙏 😎
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Left breathless…as usual…
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Thanks for partaking
of the aroma, Geetika 🙏 😎
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My pleasure…
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So beautifully written. Loved each and every line. You have a way with words.
Simplyyyyy Amazing ❤
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Greatly appreciated, Maroof 🙏
Words have a way of speaking
for themselves. Your eloquent
poetry is living proof 💛 😎
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