Dear Children,
the best of the worst,
or the worst of the best?
Do you really have a choice?
Was that ballot card marked,
stacked, and counted,
long before your birth?
Has the greed of a few
brought you to your knees?
In the big cities
there lurks a disease.
A contagious virus
of inequality and injustice,
in a petri dish
of avarice and violence.
Has the Walmart of your heart
been smashed, trashed, and looted?
The very depths of your soul
pillaged, plundered, and polluted?
Is the New Normal
of environmental degradation
to be a world of division,
ever descending into turmoil
and tribal retribution?
Whilst you slumbered
in toxic splendour
the powerful got your number.
You are now a shareholder
in what is to come.
When the higher reality
starts a-knockin’
will you open the door?
That star sign
you’ve relied upon
is now a brand name,
a slogan for selling perfume
and tampons.
That breakfast cereal selfie
that you prayed to
is now social distancing,
and denies ever knowing you.
But try not to cry
when your 99 red balloons
all fly off into the sky,
and your Kingdom
of Self-Saucing Pudding
leaves you high and dry.
Has your current reincarnation
come to the realisation
that this fleeting existence
is a once in a lifetime offering,
with no second chances?
Has your avatar
gone a dimension too far
searching the endlessness
of black hole meaninglessness
and wound up
on a desolate rock
spinning in outer space?
Dear Children,
there will be no
rising of the Sun
till the Big Wreckoning
is fully done.
Liberation is something
taken by the brave,
yet freely given
to the undeserving.
As the Temple
of Mammon falls,
and a craven panic sets in,
the skin deep superficial
and the materialistic venal,
all in a frenzy,
will soon be asking,
“What the hell is happening?!”
Dear Children,
will you answer the call
before the supernatural
starts unleashing,
without . . . and within?
“In heaven’s name, what else
was your conscience expecting
when that slow train pulls in?”
No use riding shotgun
in some proud beastie boy posse
when the party is just beginning.
The reality higher,
like a searchlight in the night
upon a mighty tower,
will be shining bright.
Too bright for many
as true power and glory
is finally revealed.
In a love filled instant
all things bent and broken,
finely and divinely healed.
Just for the asking
the repentant forgiven.
All creation
eagerly awaiting
as time itself
starts unravelling.
When the curtain comes down
on this world of crime
there is only one name
you can truly rely on.
Resistance
to the Omnipotence
will be rendered useless.
The final siren
will end this wicked game
once and for all
for all those angels fallen.
Dear Children,
don’t be forgetting the one
who holds together
the many molecules
of your very existence.
When the reckoning begins
you are going to need a lawyer
for all those things
you have said,
thought,
and done.
Most fortuitously,
and providentially,
I know a real good one.
Not with some old,
and tired,
man made religion
of rules and regulations,
stuffed full of heartache and grief.
But a simple belief
in the one person
who lived a truly holy life,
was nailed upon a cross,
and then conquered death.
Dear Children,
please always remember,
he did all this
on your behalf.
(The Romans, and the Pharisees,
could never find his missing body.
They would’ve if they could’ve.
Try as they might they were never
able to produce it, to thus nip
this Jesus thing in the bud. Most
intriguing since they had soldiers
guarding his tomb to prevent
such a thing from happening,
after Jesus had declared that on
the third day he would rise again.)
On the other hand;
“Nietzsche is dead …
after his mental breakdown,
and a long stay in the asylum.”
That’s what the Coroner said
down in old Naumburg town.
Nietzsche was then buried in
a church graveyard at RΓΆcken.
Dear Children,
the day is soon coming
when truly believing
will be seen as an act of rebellion
against the corruption
of a broken world system.
In fact, in many parts,
the persecution has already begun.
Those places that people
are desperately fleeing from.
Dear Children,
I once heard
the Angels singing.
To be plugged in
for that celestial second
was electrifying.
Yet It seemed to me
like a mortal lifetime.
I have been privileged
to glimpse
the visible expression
of the living God
being glorified in Heaven.
Yes, there is a hard line
separating truth
from deception.
Dear Children,
I say these things
with love and affection.
Please always remember
your lives have true meaning.
Hope, faith , and love,
above and beyond
all of this world’s
fear, confusion, and suffering.
Words and Images;
David B. Redpath Β© 2020
“See to it that no one takes you
captive through philosophy and
empty deception [pseudo-intellectual
babble] according to the tradition
[and musings] of mere men,
following the elementary principles
of this world, rather than following
[the truth – the teachings of] Christ.”
~ Paul, the Apostle (Amplified)
Wow…. That was beautifully written David, very profound and poignant. Thank you for this. Stay blessedπ
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Thanking you super celestially,
Diana π πΆοΈ π
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God help us all . . .
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That’s exactly what I was thinking,
Liz π π
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Iβm exhausted….what Liz said. π³π
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Thanks for persevering π
That other business,
the Presidential Beauty Contest,
should all be over π βοΈπ
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So true and sad but children are our hope
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Indeed Suzanne.
They may not be thanking us for
the mess that’s been left to them.
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This so deeply beautiful, engaging throughout and full of hope too.
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Infinitely appreciated,
Pragalbha π ππ
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My pleasure truly _()_
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So beautifully penned David. Loved the ending. π€
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Thanks for sure, Off Shore π
It seems I just can’t help myself
from diving in at the deep end π π
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And I could see that myself! π
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Wow! Profound, powerful, and masterfully written!!
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Thank you very much, Kristian.
It was a labour of love, with a
dash of trepidation.
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Open our eyes and our hearts, Lord… Amen! Such a timely admonition, David. Well done.
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Thank you muchly, Bette π
In this current Derby of Demolition
it wasn’t hard to find ammunition
for a right royal admonition π
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Wow, I am just thinking, how your thoughts flow this way !!! This is absolutely brilliant David, interesting too πππ
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Thank you for such a gracious
response π π To go with a
poetic flow is highly contagious.
I just can’t help myself π
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So poingently said David! wonderful you found words to share as I’m grappling with any right now. β€οΈ Cindy
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Greatly appreciated, Cindy π
The poetic flow does seem to
come and go, to stop and start.
Where, when, and why, is a total
mystery to me. Perhaps it’s all
about the state of the heart? π
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If thatβs true; you win the heart award along with so many of our fellow writers here. They just seem to roll off your tongue π if you figure out the mystery: Do Tell! π
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Iβm a-going back out
βfore the rain starts a-falling
Iβll walk to the depths
of the deepest dark forest
Where the people are many
and their hands are all empty
Where the pellets of poison
are flooding their waters
Where the home in the valley
meets the damp dirty prison
And the executionerβs face
is always well hidden
Where hunger is ugly,
where the souls are forgotten
Where black is the color,
where none is the number
And Iβll tell it, and speak it,
and think it, and breathe it
And reflect from the mountain
so all souls can see it
Then Iβll stand on the ocean
until I start sinking
But Iβll know my song well
before I start singing
One of these days
and it won’t be long
Going down to the valley
and sing my song
Gonna sing it loud
and sing it strong
Let the echo decide
if I was right or wrong
~ Bob Dylan
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That’s beautiful!!! Thanks for sharing it with me!!! β€οΈ
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The inspirational
inspires inspiration.
So, I listen to some
Dylan and Cohen πΆπ
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yes, that’s so true! for a minute I thought you were talking about me.. loπ€£π€£π€£π€£ Oh yes, so inspiring!!
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Indubitably
. . . Cindy π πΆοΈ
If it be your will
That a voice be true
From this broken hill
I will sing to you
From this broken hill
All your praises
they shall ring
If it be your will
To let me sing
From this broken hill
All your praises
they shall ring
If it be your will
To let me sing
If it be your will
If there is a choice
Let the rivers fill
Let the hills rejoice
Let your mercy spill
On all these burning
hearts in hell
If it be your will
To make us well
And draw us near
And bind us tight
All your children here
In their rags of light
In our rags of light
All dressed to kill
And end this night
If it be your will
~ Leonard Cohen
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Oh David, I love this!! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Thank you.. I could hear you singing. πππ
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Glad your back!! I had thought that maybe you left the WordPress universe.
A very epic and powerful poem.
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Muchos gracias, Cara.
I’ve been out and about a bit,
like a mad dog off the leash,
since my home town has just
been released from lock down
here in Victoria, Australia.
6 months+ of going stir crazy,
but it seems to have been
worth it, with no new Corona
cases for the last week π«π€
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Awesome to hear!!!!!! It’s nice to finally emerge from our little caves and rediscover life outside of them!
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Yes, this pandemic seems to have
have taken civilisation back to the
neolithic. I’ve been watching the
US Presidential election on my
Cave Network Television πΊπ
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Beautiful β£οΈβ£οΈplease check out my blog, I have interesting content, you’ll love itβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you, Nissitee π
It would be my pleasure πΉ π
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Thanks ππΊ
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reminds me of a line I just read in a short story by Douglas Stuart: ‘… when I was a boy, a stand of Douglas firs had seemed as otherworldly as the rings of Saturn’ [‘The Englishman’].
David, I would love you to have a go at writing a poem or a short piece to my post ‘Which Animal Are You?’ A contribution from you would ‘top it off’ nicely π
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I’ve been tearing my hair out, John,
trying to come up with a response
to your ‘Which Animal Are You?’ post.
So, I guess I’m now that Hairless Ape
people keep talking about? Or, am I
just back to where I started from π€
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LOL on both counts, David; got your poem, have commented on it. There’s a few more to come in then we’ll have a look and see what we’ve got
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Instagram works well for people as more and more join on daily basis. Incapable of understanding its algorithm yet following the blue ticks blindly with a belief that their spoken words matter. Should I be hopeful on the part that the world will change? A question every day I ponder and the day ends with disappointment.
I am sorry if I went off content. Your words are touching. Attractive articulation of words.
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To move with the Algorithm
is a smooth groove thing. Mass
communication synchronised
with the artificial intelligence
of a machine π€ All topics, real
and synthetic, are subject to it’s
partially omniscient oversight ποΈ
Hope floats upwards and onwards
to the heights of Love, somewhere
far above the push and shove of
this world’s chaos and violence.
Thanks Kritika, for your insights.
I had noticed your post absence.
I assumed you had permission
from the WordPress Commission,
of course π
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Smooth groove thing it is. So easily one accepts the account who has more followers (which can be bought). Brainwashing is easy this way.
I have been reading posts but writing part is difficult for time being.
Yes lols. Permitted to enter and exit anytime I want. π
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I do that a bit myself, since
have a busy life ππ outside
the Machine.
It’s interesting that if you don’t
post for a week people assume
that you’ve died π€
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That is great. The machine has ON and OFF button to do it any time one wants to.π
But really dead? π³ This is new.
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Apparently, if you’re going to unplug,
for any length of time you’ll need to
provide a medical certificate from
a WordPress certified doctor π¨βπΌ
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Did WordPress sent an email regarding this? Democracy ends here as well.
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When democracy is reduced
to a Geriatric Beauty Contest
God help the free world … or
what’s left of it π π
Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
~ T. S. Eliot
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Rightly said. π
Hope things turn out well. π―
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Oh Day of the Davidians
I’ll graft two extracts of fruitful trees:
1.
Preacher was a-talkinβ, thereβs a sermon he gave /
He said every manβs conscience is vile and depraved /
You cannot depend on it to be your guide /
When itβs you who must keep it satisfied //
&
2.
Names so deep and /
Names so true /
They’re blood to me /
They’re dust to you //
And say this: your posts are profound and truly require a number of (re)readings! β De Profundis
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Your positive feedback is greatly
appreciated, Anna π
Thank you muchly for that dose
of Dylanesque profundity π
‘Man In The Long Black Coat’, is a
personal favourite of mine.
I must play it forthwith πΆ since
I haven’t heard it for some time π
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Thanks to that thought/image I’m smiling as per the proverbial Cheshire Cat.
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Faith , hope, and love– Amen, David.
Art
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A sure recipe for a blessed existence π
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Thank you in every language!
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My perplexable pleasure, Lara π
In an uncertain future, its best
to be flexible, rather than bitter.
No sense in getting bent out of
shape, with a heart ever harder β€οΈ
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namaste my poet friend
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You have an amazing gift, David! Thank you so much for this, and for your website as a whole. β€
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Greatly appreciated, Anna ππ
For me, posting is an expression
of true freedom. A compulsion born
upon the wings of a love resurrection.
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Whoa, I was deeply touched in the beginning but as I reach the middle I felt like there’s a gaping hole in my heart. It ends wonderfully but left a bittersweet taste for me.
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Thanks for your thoughtful feedback,
Jessica. It is greatly appreciated π
With all the bitterness being shouted
from the rooftops, only a sweet dose
of divine love can ever make it stop π
βPoetry is a dangerous profession
between conflict and resolution,
between feeling and thought, between
becoming and being, between the
ultra-personal and the universal
β and these balances are shifting all
the time.β ~ May Sarton
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#Faith #Poetry | Written by #HighWayBloggery
[ ]
Dear Children
…
https://twitter.com/outosego/status/1327870831796645888
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Every word choicefully voicing the cry in so many hearts and minds..
simply brilliantly penned!!
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Very much appreciated, Taruna ππ
I do try my best to take the pulse
of the collective conciousness, but
at the risk of pissing people off π΄π€
(that’s an Australian expression for
being annoying π)
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Captivating. Loved the flow, the style has a familiar ring.
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Thank you. Very much appreciated.
I was raised on a steady diet of
Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen.
As a result, I absolutely probably
write nothing like them π
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Familiar but beautiful. Most welcome and nice to meet you. I am going to learn a lot from you. Be prepared. π
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I’ll be honest, David, I found the images a bit sad and confusing, especially at the confusing time in which I first saw this post, but you’ve won me over with the key messages of your poem, including this one at the end:
“Please always remember
your lives have true meaning.
Hope, faith, and love,
above and beyond
all of this worldβs
fear, confusion, and suffering.”
Lovely final words to hang onto, along with a good many other beautiful lines throughout the piece. A challenge worth the effort if we can succeed. π I also loved what you said to Anna, in comments above: “For me, posting is an expression of true freedom. A compulsion born upon the wings of a love resurrection.” Wow! That is poetry in itself. Hope you will post more such love-resurrecting works. Messages of faith, forgiveness and love are good in this place. We can use more of them. ππ
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Great to hear from you, Lia π
I was taking a bit of a break from
social media having just adopted
a new puppy. Who would think that
babies could be so time consuming?!
Thanks for your valued reflections
regarding my poem. I’ve just been
playing around with another one …
Death on a bender
life spent on a shopping trip
through a drugstore blender
where the lights are blinding
dreaming I was someone else
somebody off the shelf
a voice through the loudspeaker
chanting, “Shop till you drop!”
in the Mall of the Self Serving
where there is never a question
regarding motivation
but deep down
in the car park of my heart
where it was quiet and dark
where Liberation
is ever the question
I knew I was free to be me
a fire can always start
from the smallest of sparks
the consummation
of endless possibility
where heaven is waiting
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Wowzers David, that is a beauty.
Awww and congrats on your new puppy. How sweet ππ
Here’s a quickie from me:
The kids cried for xmas calendars
And I cried out for a song a day.
The kids cried for Netflix hours
And I cried for a screen mauritorium,
“No way.”
Then the crying died out
and music was played, and sung
and laughter heard,
this merry day.
Hurray! ππ₯³πΆ
Et merci David,
for this merry November
poetically spiritual πππ
bouquet. πππ
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There is ever β
a change in the weather π€οΈ
and the crying π’
never lasts forever, Lia π
When it comes
to giving thanks
always a good reminder π
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Thank you David for
replying so gracefully
to my silly
late-night ramble lol.
I must say I adore your poetry snippets:
“but deep down
in the car park of my heart
where it was quiet and dark
where Liberation
is ever the question
I knew I was free to be me
a fire can always start
from the smallest of sparks
the consummation
of endless possibility
where heaven is waiting”
So so beautiful. β¨
And true about the weather,
both internal and external βοΈπ€ππ
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How is your Christmas shopping going, David?
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We don’t do Thanksgiving π¦ π«
down under, thankfully Anna π
But we do go crazy over Christmas
here in Australia ππ where we
have much to be thankful for βοΈ
After a hard lock down π we
are a nations totally Covid free.
So the shops are full of people in
a retail frenzy shopping spree π
(I just give the kids money π΅
It seems to keep them happy π€)
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Wow, that was incredibly powerful and I felt it to the very core of my soul. Praying for all of us in these times and always especially for love, hope and truth to be unveiled. Brilliant writing David. π
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Greatly appreciated, Miriam π
It is very gratifying to receive such
positive confirmation that what I’ve
posted has connected with someone
… other than my Mum π
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Hey David, this post is amazing…
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Thank you very much, Tanisha π
… from someone who’s never been
to a creative writing class π
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Most welcomeβ¦yep thatβs funny..I mean about the creative writing classπ..though I have been there..I literally hate this classes. ..like such thing..teacher would give you a topic and you need to write thatβ¦.ππ
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Enough to incite a revolution β
A creative being feeds on freedom.
But then, a little disciple never hurt
anyone . . . much π€
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Exactly..
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But our schools won’t leave us…what to do!!
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Make good use
of the Corona Virus excuse
There’s a new contagious variant
that makes homework very dangerous
and a thing to avoid
We don’t need no education
according to Pink Floyd β π
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Hahahaπππ€
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