Toads a’ croaking
The sugarcane high
Fools rushing in
Where angels fear to fly
Doors broken
Blown open
Eucalyptus trees
Thrown asunder
In the white hot thunder
Of a cyclonic breeze
🐉 🐉 🐉
Bells toll
For the souls
Strung up
On the line
Hung out to dry
In the doing
Of hard time
Not a word of goodbye
So what could I do?
She gone with the man
with that dragon tattoo
🐉 🐉 🐉
I seen him
Hanging around
At the old truck stop
On the outskirts of town
She looked into his eyes
When he stopped her to ask
Was she going his way?
He had a face like a mask
Another snake oil peddler
Just passing through
Mayhem ‘n’ venom
Was the man
With the dragon tattoo
🐉 🐉 🐉
The preacher
Was preaching
Mannered and mild
Saying
Foolishness
Bound up
In the heart
Of the child
But who
Can you turn to?
What
Can you do?
When it’s you
Who
Was born
To be wild
Too bitter to swallow
It pierces straight through
She gave her arm to the man
With that dragon tattoo
🐉 🐉 🐉
“There’s no meaning to life.”
. . . some people say
It’s true sometimes
You can see it that way
Some rush to the strange
While others make do
There’s a sting
In the tail
Of that dragon tattoo
🐉 🐉 🐉
A tempest
Foreboding
Once raging
Now receding
To a forbidden zone
Yet in the silence
Her loneliness
Never leaves
Me alone
Visions
Born of fire
Dreams
Made of stone
Smoke
Upon the water
Flame
To the spoon
A broken wooden cross
Under a blood red moon
There’s a lonesome track
To a dark racecourse
Someone is out there
Beating on a dead horse
🐉 🐉 🐉
Is this existence
A blind witness
To the undertaker of crime?
Or is life in the living
The sowing and the reaping
A privilege divine?
Had she heard the Word
Faithful and true?
Yet she never said a thing
So what could I do?
There’s blood
On the trail
Of that dragon tattoo
🐉 🐉 🐉
~ by David B. Redpath © 2022
Inspired by Bob Dylan’s
‘Man in the Long Black Cloak’
Title Artwork by Multiple Michael
https://multiplemichael.wordpress.com/2022/02/14/picasso-13/
Artwork;
David B. Redpath © 2019 – 2022
We both seem to have dragons in our minds today 😊
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Yes, very strange Dorinda,
since it’s the year of the dog.
. . . Woof!
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lol woof to you 🐶
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That dragon tattoo has cost many lives.
It’s definitely the needle that kills.
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A needle scratching
at the basement door
saying, “Hey Baby
would you like some more?”
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Cherchez l’homme avec le dragon tattoo.
Great rhythm here.
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You’ve outdone yourself. You, sir, are a poetic genius. I am humbled by your art.
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Thank you very much,
No.12.
We stand on the shoulders
of giants. Especially me,
since I pinched some
inspiration from Bob Dylan.
But then, I did do my
research out on a limb.
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One of my favorite poems by far of this year.
Raw and very deep driven poetic brilliance. You sir, are an inspiration. 🙂
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Thank you very much Charlie.
I was just ordering a new dictionary
to enable me to assimilate your
intriguing writings. My old one
fell far short. Even my Rune Stone
was stumped. Guess I’ll just have
to use my imagination, if that’s O.K.?
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You welcome, David.
Yes, using your imagination would get you to understand closer to my works and what they all mean. 🙂
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This is awesome! I’m enjoying you writing!
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Thanks Stella.
I’ve been reading some stellar
poetic lingua, just quietly,
on the site marked SBailey.
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Blushes and smiles! I’m glad to have such a talented writer read my chicken scratch. 🙂 Thank you so much.
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Keep scratching away, Stella.
For you have soul wise things to say.
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Thank you! Sometimes I cringe at what comes out but I do it anyway!
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Perfect for the GOT night!
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I’ve been a Game of Thrones fan, Cindy,
ever since Daenerys Targaryen first flew
the dragon 😎
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I would like to show my gratitude for your kindness for all those that absolutely need help with your area. Your special dedication to getting the message throughout became really interesting and has consistently helped folks much like me to arrive at their pursuits. Your entire warm and helpful suggestions can mean so much a person like me and further more to my colleagues. Many thanks; from each one of us.
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Dank u zeer 🙏
Ik stel het zeer op prijs dat je commentaar geeft 😎
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You combined a bit of realism with fantasy. I may need to be on the lookout for the dragon tattoo.
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Look to the Maypole, Buckeye.
For Winter is coming, and the Snow Queen
is courting one 😎
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“Not a word of goodbye…” made me weep. (Not even a note.) Terrific homage and I love your art. S/he knows about the light. The seed may grow and bring healing. Pain teaches us so much.
♥.
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And a heartfelt thankyou, Niki 🙏
Most unfortunately, triumph flows
as wisdom grows, from the ashes
of tragedy 💛
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{{{David}}} Yes. “Life is a tragedy filled with joy” (Isaac Singer) ♥.
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Most poignant words and very strong imagery.
The beating a dead horse line and imagery that comes from it is particularly vivid and distressing for me.
Reminds of a scene in the film ‘Catch 22’ where a horse in a darkened alley laid on the road is being brutally beaten by a man with a whip !!!
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A great movie, and book.
It showed me that when it comes to fighting
the system, one individual just can’t win.
So best just transcend the whole damn thing
… or be sure to have fun trying ✌️😎
Sorry to cause distress, Don.
From my equestrian experience, horses are
friendly & affectionate when treated right 🏇
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Amen 🙏🏻
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Hi David I love your story poem and your artistic photos. ☺️
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Thank you overflowingly, Michelle Marie 🙏
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I like the overflowingly…Have a lovely weekend David. 🙂
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Indubitably, Michelle Marie ✔️ You too 😎
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Majestic,and powerful. My,I’m enjoying the themes this week! Thanks for posting,kindest regards and a ‘shake of the pen ‘ Adam
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Thank you, Adam 🐝✍️
My pleasure … wrapped up in clover ☘️😎
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David, your insatiably hungry spam folder keeps gobbling up my comments! 😱
Could you feed it something else, please! 🙄
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Sorry about that, Punam 💔
I’ll have to get my No.4 son, the software
engineer, onto it. 🤔 Being a technophobe,
I have to get him to do all the cyber stuff.
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Lol I am a technophobe too!
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Yes, pushing all those buttons is hard work 😎
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Extremely so! 😂
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Just when I get the hang of pocket calculators, fax machines, and pagers
… they’re all out the window, and you’ve
got to start all over learning a new device.
I think I’ve got future shock!
I best go on strike 😎
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Ah please don’t do that
the computer, pad or phone
won’t go out of the window so soon
so, hang in there till your poems can be delivered by a drone!😎
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“I feed my carrier pigeons
with the bones of drones.”
~ Conan the Librarian 😎
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Tell Conan the Librarian a carrier pigeon would do
Bezos can stuff his promise of drones!
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Domino’s pizza too …
Along with their drone delivered stuffed crust!
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Yup, them too! I guess we are a dying breed!
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We’ll be making our last stand
upon a mountain of obsolescence ✌️
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Viva la vida!
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And so says Davida! ✨
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Excellent poem, David.
There’s indeed blood on the tail of that man with the Dragon Tattoo.
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His trail is not hard to follow, Chris 😎
So I do hope that Pan Goatee catches
up with him … eventually 🚬💣💥🗡️
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Here’s hoping. 😄
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All humans are wonderful example of misunderstanding or mischievous. Animals are better than human.
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They are certainly better behaved 😎
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Yeah .you are right☺
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This distinct mix of eclectic ecstasy and neurologically troubling psychedelia is the foremost reason as to why you are one of my favorite people on WordPress… 😎
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Thank you most ecstatically, Watt 🙏
Trembling neurones, fully blown,
are prone to the psychodelic when
riding upon the dragons back 🐉
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Love dragons. Wouldn’t mind having a dragon tattoo but…I hate needles. EEK.
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Especially at the moment, with
President Smaug on the rampage,
and the tattoo parlours shut down.
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Wow, reminded me of North Queensland, Australia 🇦🇺
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You got the cane toad reference,
Sugar ☑️ 🇭🇲👌🐸 😎
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Love the way you incorporate lines from many different songs to create your own dragon chase. 🔥🐉
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I’m the lyrical product of a
musical misspent youth 🎶 😎
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This was spellbinding… I’m not sure how you do it but so much love comes through in your posts in spite of the slightly ominous atmosphere, it’s really a nice thing to read them. I liked the dragon emoji stanza separators. That artwork at the end!!!! Unreal. I’m thrilled to see you posting more! Keep going please! 😇🙏🥳💛
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Thanking you libaciously, Lia 🙏
I’ve been chasing that dam dragon,
from Mount Doom, to the land down
under. I suspect that lounge lizard🐲
is a lunar virus 🌕 super spreader.
In the meantime, I’ll make progress
reports of my endless search 👁️👁️
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You intrigue me David
And yet I sometimes feel
I’ve been in cahoots with you
Without even knowing it. 🐲🧚🏼♀️🧞♂️⁉️🔆 Bon continuation et Bon courage. 💗
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Wow, this is amazing
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Thank you very much, Jude.
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My pleasure really
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Superb!
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Muchas gracias.
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De rien.
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Powerful, David. So many are seduced by lies.
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Deception often comes
with a sugar coating 🍭
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You can file this comment under wierd associative reader response: your poem reminds me of Alfred Noyes’ “The Highwayman.” It must be something about how repetition is used. I’ve been meaning to ask, do you have showings of your artwork in the brick-and-mortar world?
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A forty singing seamen salute to
you Liz, for the reminder of that
grand poet, Alfred Noyes.
The author of Dick Turpin’s Ride.
‘The Highwayman’ is an epic tale
of tragic romance along the lines of
Romeo and Juliet. At least the ghosts
of Bess and her highwayman lover
get to meet again on winter nights.
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When I was little, I would beg my dad to read “The Highwayman” to me. Why it would speak so strongly to a four-year-old, I do not know, but it did.
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A young romantic tragic 🤔 🕶️
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😀 Yes, then I developed a histrionic streak. Tut tut.
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All good stimulation for
a fevered imagination 👍
Science Fiction was my thing,
with a serve of Sword ‘n’ Sorcery
on the beat poetic wild side 😎
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Ah, I can see how that childhood feeds your art and poetry. Keep ’em coming!
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❤️
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🐲 💚 😎
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I’ve missed you. I still adore your posts. Beautiful additions to a world full of strife.
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I’m a lock down peculiarity.
I’ve ever been so busy, EC.
But I do my contagious best
to keep a finger on the pulse
of my poetic favourites,
such as your eloquent self 💖
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Be safe ❤️ And healthy
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🙏 💖 😇 🕶️
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great lyrics; reminds me of ‘Red Right Hand’ by Nick Cave in its sinister, evocative images
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Thank you exceedingly, John.
As a bad seedling I very much
appreciate the comparison 😎
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A great poem! Love the artwork also
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Very pleased. Thanks Dwight 🙏
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Your poetry is so rich w/ meaning, David. I find myself delving into it, again and again.
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Thanks for the revisit, Anna 🙏❤️
Your feedback is greatly appreciated.
Providentially, I’ve survived a slow
motion near death experience.
It would seem to give one something
to write about.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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WOW! I totally forgot this one, David! It’s wonderful! I have no idea why and I’ve never had this happen while reading You before but I got thrown into a sort of Gatsby-ish Fitzgerald funk from this. I could see it all so clearly.
I was left heartbroken for him and more than a little worried for her.
Once again, The David Express took me somewhere.
And the art of you both is beautiful!!! Thank You!!! Cheers and hugs! 🤗💖😊
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F. Scott & Zelda Fitzgerald in Paris
with Ernest Hemingway in the 1920’s!
That would be the roaring place to be!
Thank you very muchly, Katy, for the
revisitation of my cautionary poem.
Many a string was broken in the
writing, but my old violin just keeps
on playing. Forgotten faces, and
haunted places, are forever bathed in
the stream of my fevered imagination,
so better to express than keep it all
locked up down in the dungeon.
Sorry that it left you a wee bit
perplexed and heartbroken 💔
“The tune that is yours and mine
to play upon this earth,
We’ll play it out the best we know,
whatever it is worth,
What’s lost is lost, we can’t regain
what went down in the flood … ”
~ Bob Dylan
… and yes, Multiple Michael’s artwork
is most poetically inspirational 🎨
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My absolute pleasure, David! You can break my heart anytime with Your incredible flows! And I LOVE this:
“Forgotten faces, and
haunted places, are forever bathed in
the stream of my fevered imagination,
so better to express than keep it all
locked up down in the dungeon.”
Hey….if You ever find/design a time machine and head back to Paris in the 20’s….I wanna come!!!! Cheers and Hugs! 😃🥂😊
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Si seulement, Katy 🙏
In the meantime I’ll just have to ask
you do you parlez-vous français?
And then make do with watching that
movie ‘Midnight In Paris’ with Woody
(providing Rachel and Owen don’t get
too feisty 😎).
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NO!!! But I’m learning Italian as I have very vivid fantasies of moving to Italy in a few years! Does that count?!! 🤣 And….sigh. YES! I’ll take Woody’s midnight in Paris! Laughing here because I’m trying to think of something witty to say but my stone-cold crush on Owen stopped me in my tracks! You got me!!!! Cheers, my friend!!! Thanks for the laugh! 🤣💖🤗
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I’m now in a Uffizi Firenze, lost
in a Renaissance art gallery 😁🎨
somewhere in old Tuscany
where you have sent me with
the merest mention of Italy 🇮🇹
Thank you muchly, Katy 🙏💛 😎
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AHHH!!!! Sign me up!!!! I’ll be there someday! I LOVE how much Y’all have traveled!!! Sighing though a HUGE taking-over-my-entire-being!!! smile as I walk away swimming in Italian adventures to come!!!! Yay!!! Thank You muchly as well, my friend!!! 💖💖💖
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I love this poem, David.
I can definitely see Dylan’s influence on it.
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Thanks Christopher.
You can’t go far wrong pilfering
one of Bob Dylan’s poems 😎
If only I had the musical talent
to turn it into a song 🎶🤔 🕶️
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This is beautiful, loved the flow. The girl with a dragon tattoo.. brimming with nostalgia!
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A most fluent thank you, Tanya.
Yes, I gave up chasing that girl
with the dragon tattoo 🐲 as she
was no good for my health 😎
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Good for you, some chases are not worth it!
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Wow! amazing and haunting; I’m going to read it a few more times : a tantalizing narrative almost in ballad form 🙂
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I actually wrote this one to be a
spoken word performance piece,
to be delivered with a staccato
beat. Hence the short sharp
phrasing. It also helps the old
memory in the delivery, John 👍
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ever thought of presenting this piece in a poetry slam, David?
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Did this one once, but there were
children in the audience … then
I realise I had accidentally gone to
the local day care centre instead
of the poetry workshop 😎
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hahahaha; you’ve got to be more aware of your surroundings, David; you might end up behind the blue curtain reciting your poetry to nonplussed nurses 🙂
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From time to time, we could
all do with a good nurse 🤔
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echoes of Nick Cave’s ‘Red Right Hand’ and Stephen King’s ‘The Man in the Black suit’ but your work boasts its own independent juice 🙂
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Even a bad seed can succeed
in sprouting a haunting read 😱
Thanks for venturing down my
Highway of Bloggery, a road less
taken for good reason, John 😎
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Lol; an adventurous read, David 🙂
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I absolutely love this poem. Utterly brilliant!
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Thank you exceedingly, Vinny.
Very much appreciated 🙏
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Most wonderfully written in such
a terrible situation of world, yeah.
All lives have many joys but in a
climate of dragon’s fearing tatoo
inside. Gorgeous, dear Redpath!!
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Thank you very much, Aruna 🙏
As the great American wartime
president, Franklin D. Roosevelt,
once said,
… the only thing we have to fear
is fear itself.
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Yeah.you said right.fears vanish always all type peaces.do you agree,dear Redpath!!
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Most certainly, Aruna ☑️
“Fear not, for I am with you; be not
dismayed, for I am your God; I will
strengthen you, I will help you, I will
uphold you with my righteous right
hand.” ~ Isaiah
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Yeah.most Holy words Of Isaiah.🙏🙏🙏
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amazing words and picture David! 👏👏👏
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Thank you, Cindy 🙏
Very much appreciated.
Yes, I just had to use that
haunting image from the
portfolio of Multiple Michael.
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you’re so welcome David!
of course you did my friend.
Damn it’s unspeakable crushing!~ 💖💖🌻🙏🌻🌻🙏🙏
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Wow you blow me away David. That was so amazing writing. You can truly write the truth. Beautiful piece. Love you work. ❤️🤗🦋
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Greatly appreciated, Joni 💝
Some poems take but moments
to read, yet a lifetime to write 📝
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I understand what you mean David. It was an amazing piece. So glad you shared it. Blessings to you both from NC. ❤️
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A++++++
Thank you, David!
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Thanks exceedingly for that generous
Double Triple A rating, Resa 🙏 😎
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
RAT-TAT-TAT.
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A great tag line, Jonathan 👌😎👍
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A stinging tale indeed, with fresh dragon feed
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Thank you for venturing into
my liar of despair, Tanmay 🙏 🐲
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I like the tune of your lyre and its abhorrence for dragon fire 🔥 Which in this age seems to reign to the sad refrain of the King of Pain. (I had to bring Sting into it somehow or the other)
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Well forged, Tanmay 😎👍
Clearly a noble word smith worthy
of royal patronage. May your sturdy
armoury withstand the slings and
arrows of outrageous fortune 💪
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Aw shucks. Thanks 😃 I learnt from the best.
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Marvelous, love the lines about the broken cross and moon. They’re perfect in that eerie way that can’t be explained. 👏👏
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The deepest unfathomable
thank you, K. 🙏 😎
I did sit at the feet of the
Poet Laureate of Rock ‘n’ Roll
for a while, but he told me to
go away, and that inspiration
don’t come cheap 🤔
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Ohhh wow!
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Very much appreciated 🙏
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Complete…
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A poetic masterpiece, David.
I like how you spaced apart that phrase “Man with that dragon tattoo” to make an important point.
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A thank you in indelible ink,
Christopher 🙏
Yes, to be spaced out, and still
manage to make a point is a
trick I have not mastered yet 😎
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