“I saw the best minds of my generation
destroyed by madness, starving
hysterical naked, dragging themselves
through the negro streets at dawn
looking for an angry fix.”
~ Allen Ginsberg
THE PERSISTENCE
The gleaning
seeking fallen fruit
after the harvesting
Neither sowing small
nor reaping big
The art of just surviving
Street wise shaded eyes
failing to disguise
a festering fever
of hidden trauma
Is this life but a test?
A trial by unholy fire?
Infected
Free on bail
Evicted and ejected
Ice forming
upon neural pathways
of a brain inflicted
Ever and always
the only gain
with a taste for hell
hidden deep within a well
of …”You must never tell!”
Down a bottomless pit
the prisoner of pain
With only a bitter grain
of dissolving shelter
from the sacrement
of helter skelter
Worshipped and injected
That sword of fate
self inflicted
with words of hate
scrawled upon the wall
of a darkened cell
The poetry of chaos
and innocence lost
boasting the loss
Not knowing the cost
The tunnel you’re digging
whatever
you’ve been mainlining
whoever
you’ve been channeling
it is truly gutter diving
in the company
of creatures crawling
Babies on ice born
The fabric of flesh torn
by hellhounds mauling
The ammunition
of a combustion engine
shooting holes
through a biosphere bleeding
A black market to counter
your personal evolution
Like a hungry vegan lost
roaming the wilderness
of a land ever flowing
with spilt milk
and blood money
Let’s get this over with, Honey!
Get on with the hanging
An ancient tree is swaying
to an angry melody
and is impatiently waiting
for the final dance of death
That hypnotic strip tease
in suicidal slow motion
Upon a cold and bitter breeze
guilt is left swinging
Beyond all regret
… never forget
you are a one
in 7 billion special
to the Great Eternal
Who’s love is insistent
with a persistent yearning
You are never just another
drop of plastic
in the cosmic ocean
Humanity broken
and begging for mercy
Becoming a byproduct
of a disassembly line
never ending
I smell the essence
of obsolescence
“A plus size dose, please
… to forget the regret
of my industrial disease.
Make it a double!”
In the poetry
of primal lust
and broken trust
in a sea of trouble
we all have
our cross to bear
But I guess
the overbearing
just get cross
with the persistence
of unforgiveness
In a fixed race
where only the obsequious
and the bodacious
stand a hell of a chance
Not some free thinking
panty-waist
As Salvation’s Corp
feed the hungry poor
an army of salivation
feeds the intravenous
and the delirious
all under the sway
of a heavy metal pentecost
Dying to stoke the fire
of eternal desire
with hands of frost
holding on firmly
to a twin necked guitar
Caught in yesterday’s gravity
the user becomes the past
The marginalized
and the criminalized
a mental health commodity
Commandeered by fear
then socially engineered
Used and abused
by the criminal boss
empowered by the sin
of prohibition
Only the devil wins
in this losing game
of prohibiting “sins”
Corruption from the highest
to the lowest of places
And a multitude of disgraces
in the killing field
of a pharmaceutical industry
Heavy duty spiritual poverty
on a high of corporate prosperity
The alchemy of a golden yield
When it comes
to human charity
Image is the priority
Style without substance
Like a celebrity on oxy
Meanwhile …
you too can be a winner
with a reconstructed smile
Just Instagram a picture
of your dinner
You are the epitome
of cosmetic health
In the fame game of life
you are surely a grinner
And you’ve still got your wealth
So just post another selfie
No one will ever see
the truth underneath
With minions scanning
my voter data base
and a bad case of ichyosis
the scrofulous
the censorious
and the divisively mysterious
all scamming my
democractic weakness
with trivia superfluous
Whilst from Syria to Yemen
children are dying of starvation!
Tribal squabbles
and iron age religion
in the hard rain
of barrel bombing mutilation
As you spill your life of privilege
down a stormwater drain
In the once holy lands
chemical agents of tyranny
are poured without mercy
upon ancient sands
The shadow of death rising
Like junk on the streets
… persistently pushing
Why do l feel
it is all part and parcel
of the one big deal?
The oil keeps flowing
The cartels keep harvesting
The big guns keep on firing
as missiles are flying
Is the C.I.A administrating?
Or is this madness
just the Alien Alias
making a mess
whilst self-medicating
from a deep state of corruption?
Empires of the Earth chasing
the tail of some dragon
With that smell of sarin
in the napalm morning
Dropping the boom
for that rush of rebellion
I guess a spoonful
of blood diamonds
does help
the medicine go down
Upon a rock
in outer space
constantly spinning
the existential grievance
most industrious
with an unholy persistence
still clinging
to the sorcery of substance
Abusing the all consuming
and the wholly ravenous
The words hollow and tragic
with claims prophetic
only ringing true
within the cavernous fears
of receptive ears
A reckoning overdue
The fateful charismatic
plotting dark magic
with a star chart of tears
and a familiar psychotropic
dwelling in life’s basement
Faith broken
and misled
Truth seekers forsaken
as retro hippies
injest the false token
of a secret potion
The sorcery
of a shamanic pharmacy
is no stairway to heaven
Chanting over
the books of crooks
with just a spoof of truth
whilst buying stuff
blessed in eternal plastic
Smoking the cash
Flowing the stash
Seeking the peace
from a frantic manic
gone in a puff
Playing a game of shame
Riding life’s merry go round
on a horse that’s gone lame
Seeking only who’s to blame
Putting yourself
in the frame
You just gotta love ’em
all the same
For there is a plan
that is grand
with the gift of hope
in one’s open hand
A sound mind
with the Spirit in front
and behind
Justice … just in time
The season for reaping
in the light of reason
Within the Great Spirit
a mighty wind is roaring
A lingering question
upon a gentle whisper
Could Jesus be the answer
you’ve been silently seeking?
With persistence tough
and a whole lotta love
to break the chains
Enough to tame
the proud and the vain
Even initiates
of the wholly insane
The sum total
of your reality ethereal
to be in the Spirit
who brings that taste
of true kingdom freedom
as on the wings of an eagle
… gracefully soaring
Seventy times seven
… the persistence
of forgiveness spiritual
A pierced hand
holding all things together
The healing
of hidden trauma
in an open door deal
The all in all
beyond all that’s surreal
As cereal box science
tries to apply a dress code
to this existence
of brokenness
and cultural abuse
To excuse the misuse
of dark substance . . .
useless without repentance
Don’t be recused
In the light of the Son
become one
with the total sum
With all persistence
perseverance
and spirited resilience
we can truly become
the triumphant resistance
against an Empire of darkness
~ Words & Image:
David B. Redpath © 2018-2020
“Religion is for people who fear hell.
Spirituality is for people who have been there.”
~ David Bowie
Photography;
Linda Redpath © 2020
This is powerful writing, and pretty much a damnation of what we have allowed ourselves and our society to become. Impressive work.
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Thanks for reading, Chris,
and your kind comments.
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You’re welcome.
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The life & times of the got ‘the directions wrong’ underclass. And you’re right. Of all the religious lot the Sally Army do it without fuss or point scoring.
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Thanks George.
I guess, without the life and crimes
of these “progressive” times,
I’d have nothing to write about.
Wouldn’t that be nice!?
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Without polar opposites I guess we wouldn’t know good from bad. Maybe that’s why the concept of a heaven is lost on me. Keep the faith. I reckon you won’t run out of subject matter to write about any time soon.
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Wow. Pantywaist. I thought I was the only one who used that term. Ravenous, selfie, vain, cereal box, mental health, hollow, delirious, pharmacy, evicted, plus size. My, my.
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And when I order a hamburger
I ask for one with the lot.
Soon I’ll have to expand my ‘panty-waist’!
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Nice. My grandma would tell us not to be a pantywaist. She didn’t want us to be weaklings or pushovers. Lol
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It really is something John Wayne
would say …
to any ‘un-American’ trouble makers.
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Interesting. My grandmother was from Oakland and her family was from Iowa and she was born in 1927. She wasn’t John Wayne fan that I know of LOL
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Could be, that as a self appointed
Deputy Sheriff of McCarthyism,
the ‘Duke’ would have lost many fans.
The free thinking ones anyway.
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Where did you find inspiration for all those words I mentioned?
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I just paddle around
on my board
and wait for the next set,
from a tidal swell.
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Interesting. Is it a 2 x 4, or of the skating kind? 😂 Tidal swell of tears…
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Boogie. Kinder on the knees.
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Lmao how often do you surf? Are you talking about the net? 🙂
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As in a Body Board, in Oz we call them
Boogie Boards … ’cause you get down
on them. I only go when it’s warm.
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Oh. Body boards that you get down on? I read that wrong the first time. Lol. Yes I’m familiar with Boogie Boards.
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Btw, you don’t have to keep chatting with me. Just tell me to shut it. Lol
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*Finger snaps//hand claps*
Justice served?
Hot trash.
Colors clash?
Teeth gnash.
Mad dash
For your cash-
Our past
Gift wrapped…
Relapse
To relax;
Spring traps,
Leg not clasped.
Their masks:
In our hands.
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The mask
of the past
has relapsed
beyond our grasp
Unwrapping
the wiretapping
of all the mad dashing
is our appointed task
… Thanks Aurora Borealis
for all your finger snapping
It really is a blast!
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Ohhhhh! No words. Just love ❤️
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Your poetry rings and sings of beat poetry at its best!
Your Language speaks great fury of volumes that I love and respect of you so much.
My favorite write by you. 🙂
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I read it in one breath……engaging and …..it really makes you think
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Dear lady,
I would not want
you to suffocate.
Perhaps I should
apply some brevity
to my poetry?
Thanks Ortensia
for engaging.
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No no no…..I practice yoga I m good on holding my breath😉😍
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A poetic masterpiece you have written here, David.
Every line you have penned here is a great quotation in itself.
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Thank you very much, Chris.
Like Tom Waits, it feels good
to let loose, and play the Renfield
in a Bram Stoker horror story.
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I can’t decide what I like more ; your poems or rejoinders to comments!
I think I can like both equally and more!
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Thank you very much, Punam.
My father taught me to always
have a comeback handy, just
in case, one day, you need
… to comeback.
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A good lesson that you have imbibed very well.
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Powerfully written
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Thanks for taking the time
to read, Andrew.
So you finally got that window
shut then?
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I like to think so.
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Deeply thought-provoking.
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Thanks for reading
and commenting.
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Your ideas are really flowing..
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They seem to trickle in.
I dug myself a reservoir
to keep them in.
Thanks, Marion,
for the commenting.
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You’re welcome anytime.
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You’ve exposed society’s faults and flaws so brilliantly here. A little dark humour too? Excellent writing.
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Thanks very much, Nitin.
I just try to call it, as I see it.
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I gotta be honest with you, I only understood pieces of this piece. The second time I read it some of it was clearer, but most remains cryptic to me. What I understood I thought was well written.
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Thanks for the feedback, James.
I guess you had to be there.
But then, there are places
you just don’t want to go.
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Damn David, this is so freaking awesome. I love this line: “And a multiple of disgraces
in the killing fields
of the pharmaceutical industry”
Bravo!
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Elvis Presley, Michael Jackson,
Heath Ledger, Prince …
the list is endless.
All cut down before their natural
time by the synthetic pumping
crime of the pharmaceutical
industry.
Thanks for the comment, Walt.
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My pleasure sir.
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Heavy duty spiritual poverty
on a high of corporate prosperity…what a line…however long the poem…one is compelled to hang on for the ride…from one word to the next to the very end and then repeat…
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I call it as I see it, Geetika.
Thanks for hanging on.
So glad you can relate to it.
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welcome…I’m glad I did…hang on..honest brave expression always resonates with a reader..
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I am in awe of your poetry David. You express so much of what I think and feel, but cannot express myself. I wish I had a gift like yours. Anazing talent and insight. God bless you David.
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Thank you very much, Lorraine.
I believe spending time
in life’s wringer, will eventually
squeeze something out of you.
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Lol. God only knows what, but we will start with shocking pink socks and fleas! Yes, life’s wringer. We can take it either way can’t we! Up or down, and sometimes both ways at the same time. What I am certain of is that there is eternal life, because I have seen it when I nearly died. But I work through the Cross. It is all we have, when suffering comes. We can relate to that, but I hesitate to write about that, with so many different relugions in here, and each with its own unique value. I don’t want to offend or exclude anyone. And yet I set my own blog up as having the Cross central to my writing. Oh well…. lol. We will see! Or not see, as the case may be! Thankyou for your friendship David, and for your faitho
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We need to keep an
open searching mind
if ever the truth to find,
yet with a pink sock
firmly planted on the Rock.
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Lol
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Love the artwork and how you chanelled beat poetry. Your flow is magnificent, reading this was like you emptied a tunnel of horror, then redecorated it with your unique creations and concoctions. Enter at your own risk! Great work
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Thank you very much, Matthias.
I was weened on the writings
of the beat generation.
Then self medicated with
a psychedelic prescription.
I appreciate your appreciation.
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We all have our cross to bear
Even though, we only stare and glare
Cupids arrows are made sharper
Than an old whaling harpoons money order
Your words meanings are precise
Leaving piles of putrid mice
Floating on leftover stale ice
Oh please let me come into storm
Out of the blizzard, I need to be warm
———-
And in the end I sough refuge from your words
So many damn adjectives, nouns, and verbs
—————
“Ice forming
upon neural pathways
of a brain inflicted
Ever and always
the only gain
with a taste for hell
hidden deep within a well
of “You must never tell!”
Down a bottomless pit
the prisoner of pain”
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Thank for that, Ivor.
And yes, I know … “Less is more.”
But I was raised on Shakespeare,
and the writings of Longfellow.
For your perseverance you richly
deserve a dose of Dylan.
Straight up … Short & Sweet 😎
“Twas in another lifetime,
one of toil and blood
When blackness was a virtue
the road was full of mud
I came in from the wilderness,
a creature void of form
Come in, she said
I’ll give ya shelter from the storm.”
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Oh.. wouldn’t it be wonderful
To write words like that…..
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Yes, there can only be one
Poet Laureate of Rock ‘n’ Roll.
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That’s one of my favourite songs! Inspiring writing–so many of the lines hit close to home. Superb!
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A person of immaculate taste, & grace.
Thanks for the encouragement 😎
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Keep making me envy you…
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Grazie mille!
“I Envy Me Too!”😎
(I actually saw this printed on a dress
worn by a most attractive women
strolling through central Florence.)
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Perhaps you could patent that Persistence we could all do with a bowl of it to kick the morning off. I just make do with a bowl of alphabet soup at lunch time.
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I tried, but there was some resistance
at the patent office 😎
And I like animal crackers in my soup.
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A man of many tastes and talents.
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🙏 😎
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The Bowie quote … ✌🏼
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Ashes to Ashes … 🌹
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Superb, l will hunt the song down again on my playlist 👌🏻✌🏼
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👍You can’t go wrong with Major Tom 😎
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True.
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Excellent piece of writing explaining the reality of this society..
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Thanks for that, Chiru.
I did do some time dwelling upon a fault line.
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Beat poetry to its core. Not nice, but very nice.
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Thanking you, Mitch.
A culture caught in a vice. Preferably,
this world could exceedingly nice 😎
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written in true beat fashion. I can almost here a bongo drumming in the background.
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Thank you very much, Violet
I couldn’t aspire to get any higher
than the beat poets of yesteryear 😎
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Dear David, I adore that the proportions here are epic! At times it seem like the whole opposable thumb world has its finger on the trigger, a harbinger of ill will against our sisters and our brothers. Let’s do more than the hokey-pokey and turn ourselves around, we need to think straight and jump into the light before the final Big Bang.
Awesome, I thoroughly enjoyed traveling down this path with you. Fantastic poem/narrative! ~ Mia
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Always the choice, Mia. To become one
with a reality much higher, or join the herded
bipeds being consigned to history.
Humanity does not need to be just another
sad story, with an unhappy ending.
This life is for living, and in truth, transcending.
Thank you very much Mia, for reading . . .
and the simpático commenting 🙏💛😎
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You’re most welcome, David.
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David, this is a powerful piece of literature. The armor of truth is not easily worn when shield by
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… incomprehension. I’m sorry, I hit send to soon.
Your writing is filled by what your soul carries from witnessing so much of life! Memorable!
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I prematurely hit that little SEND button all
the time.
I also tend to look around … and ask why?
But then, visions & dreams leave me asking,
why not?
Thanks for taking the time reading 😎
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I understand David. Though too many why’s can break a heart! ☹️ Thank you for David your amazing writing, and sharing of your life’s journey!☀️
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My compulsive pleasure 😎🙏
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Ichyosis? 😆
You certainly have a firm poetic thumb on the thready pulse of the human condition.
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I do a bit of scratching about, Vic 😎
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I was wondering if you were going for:
https://www.dictionary.com/browse/ichthyosis
But, both apply. LOL!
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A case of ichthyosis would be too much!
And ichthyotic doesn’t sound very poetic😎
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Good point!
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Drugs, corruption, more drugs, climate change, more drugs, big oil, more drugs, chemical and poison gas, more drugs, guns, more drugs, blood diamonds, more drugs, cultural abyss, more drugs.
That about sums up the current state of the world all right.
And the hands of love are those pierced by nails on a Cross.
While the hands of despair are those holding a needle piercing their own veins.
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A synopsis par excellence, Chris.
The world does seem to need a saviour,
if not a sartyr with a machete type laser 😎
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God. GOD!!! The David train slicing though existence. Amazing! My heart is still racing. Damn and Thank You and Cheers times a trillion!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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So glad you enjoyed the ride, Katy 🙏
And I’ve always wanted to be a Casey Jones
driving a locomotive of commotion down
the fast track of some cosmic ocean 😎
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Methinks You’re succeeding grandly!
Take my emotions and slam me…
Leave my heart reeling in wild thoughts and feelings with words that completely astound me!!! 😁💖🤗
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Words cannot express my gratitude for
your kind & generous comments, Katy.
Your pictures are worth a thousand words,
plus. So keep on creating 🌀❄️🌊 ⭐⚡💛
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Completely my pleasure, David! And Thank You!!! 💖🙏🏼🦋☀️😊
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Literally, my literary pleasure, Katy 💛😎
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💖
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Took me a while to read it and to understand, but i enjoyed every single word, thank you for this unique piece of art❤️
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I very much appreciate that, Ilona.
Thanks for taking the time 🙏
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Wow, this perfectly penned. Seriously great work👌❤❤
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Thank you very much, E.W.🙏
Not least for the serious perseverance
in reading this piece all the way through 😎
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
POWERFUL–BLESSED BE TO THE FATHER AND TO THE SON AND TO THE HOLY SPIRIT—THREE PERSONALITIES–IN ONE HOLY GOD!
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Nice compliments on new generation.dear!!
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Thanks for that, Aruna 🙏
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I would have packed my backpack, if I had known I was going on a journey 😛 Gotta love a poet that provokes a thousand thoughts.
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Yes, I should’ve included a trigger warning
… to bring a packed lunch before venturing
out 😎 Thanks for taking the trek 🙏
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The poem is short but carries a lot of meaning if scrutinized properly.
Such a profound way of writing. Love the beginning part of it( The gleaning
seeking fallen fruit)
and the end part of the poem just made it look real again(
the triumphant resistance
against an Empire of darkness)
Thanks for giving me that mindset about emotion as you said in your poem explanation.
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Thank you for taking the time to scrutinise.
I simply try to covert into words all I observe.
But the words choose to come out as poetry.
It is a profound mystery to me.
For as Pluto once said, “I know nothing”.
So best to keep things simple 🙏😎
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You are welcome
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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amen… excellent work thanks for sharing
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You are very welcome 🙏
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Any time I take a roller coaster through hell, I think I would be happy to have you as a tour guide. What a frenetic poetic damnetic ride, with an upward slide, right out to the liiiiigggghhht 🎢🙌😎🌈🌞😇
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When flat on my back
the paramedic said to stay
away from the light 💡
I just thought I’d check it out
… Why the hell not? 😎
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True story, David?
(about the paramedic pow?)
I will have to re-read this now
What an inspiring feeling of wow 🔆
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Yes, but my guardian angel
was in attendance 😇 so we
got to do the Happy Dance
of Fortuitous Circumstance 😎
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Well I’m certainly glad
Your guardian angel was there
To help bring you back
With some of that light so fair 😇🌟🙏💫
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p.s. the photos are fab 🤩
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Thanks Nadine.
Linda likes to click 📸
and I like to rejig 🌈 👀
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Wonderful poetry and inspirational for all. Really, I hate those who are responsible to increase the pollution. Especially the ocean’s polluted. Well done, dear Redpath.
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Thank you, Aruna 🙏
I do have hope that at the end
of a long dark tunnel, there will
be a bright shining future 🌞😎
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😊😊😊😊true.right.🌞🙏
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Love the David Bowie quote. The poem ain’t bad either 😉 .
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Happy to amuse, Señor Muse 😎
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😉
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I feel the same. I think those kind of thoughts. I’m with David Bowie.
Thank you, David!
You’re like a 21st century beatnik poet. I could hear bongos while I read this.
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Now that you mention it, Resa,
the idea of me was conceived
in New York, on Long Island,
about the time when beatniks
were roaming the earth. Perhaps
Jack Kerouac had a hand in it 🤔
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Oh, I got a big chuckle out of the 1 Ho Photo!
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Thats me, Resa 😎
Don’t tell anybody 🤫🕶️
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Thought at first we were to be treated to a kind of surreal version of Edgar Allan Poe but, then, somehow, things seemed to switch to “Let him that is without sin first cast the stone” followed by allusions to the Book of Revelation…? 🙂
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I just go where I’m sent, Peter.
I guess that’s my poetic bent 😎
What’s an epic odyssey down a
labyrinth without a way back out
the rabbit hole? 🐰
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An Iliad, perhaps?
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With Ulysses in Wonderland
tuned into the Sirens on a one
night stand.
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This a fabulous piece I have read in many days. Beautifully you have written everything in this piece. Like the way you mentioned a human to not to consider himself like plastic in this cosmic ocean. Wao.
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Greatly appreciated, Kritika 🙏
Yes, every human soul is precious.
Above, and beyond, all the rubbish
we do, and surround ourselves with.
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True that is. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 🙂
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Happy Valentine’s Day, David! The first time You posted this I was so (as ALL-WAYS) blown away by the insanely powerful force that is Your expression that I missed how wonderfully funny the top photo is!!! My inner eighth grade boy missed that it says “1 Ho Photo”. Ok. Now I love this all the more!!! You and most Beautiful Jimi hangin’ out…like….”Yeah…What?!!!” 🤣Thank You for this joy You just gifted. Cheers!!! 🤗💕🌀🙏🏼😊
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A big interdimensional thank
you Katy 🙏
I trust you’re having a most
divine valentine 💝
That picture was Jimi’s idea,
off course 📸 He’s never one to
miss a photo opportunity 😎
Yes, the subtlety was lost on me.
Linda just said, “Lean up against
that wall, and I’ll capture the
real you.” 😁 🕶️
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🤣That’s hysterical! Genius! Now I love Linda even more!!! We did have a divine Valentine’s Day!!! I hope Y’all did as well! Interdimensional hugs ricocheting off the light walls of blogosphere! 🤗🙏🏼🙏🏼🦋😊
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Everyday should be a Valentine’s
Day, when you’re fortunate enough
to have found true love 💞 💐 💝
And you don’t allow the all the
worldly crap get in the way ☣️🚫😎
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Here Here!!! ❤️❤️❤️!!!!!!!
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Excellent work as always. Ginsberg’s words, the flow and rhymes of your poem, the critique of our abusive system, massive killings, endless wars, countless mistreated human beings… Everything so eloquently expressed!
The last lines are very powerful:
“With all persistence
perseverance
and spirited resilience
we can truly become
the triumphant resistance
against an Empire of darkness.”
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I love the photos, David; I’m sorry, I can’t get into the poetry: the fault is not in the writing, it’s in the narrowness of vision of the reader 😦
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That’s OK John. Most of the time
I need someone to explain it to me.
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that’s a wonderful, self-deprecating response, David. Thanks
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This is a great piece! Addiction is such a destructive destroyer of society.. Your images are amazing. Loved the vehicles tooting holes in the atmosphere!!
Dwight
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Thanks for perusing, Dwight.
I must admit, I’m addicted to love.
A predisposition shared by humans
with a heart. Out of desperation, in
a world that plays rough, there’s a
temptation to try other stuff. But
those counterfeit alternatives 🚫
are devilishly addictive, and just
never enough.
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You said it right… they are never enough!
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