The pride of humanity
of glorious consciousness
upon a red carpet of vanity
this slipstream of existence
glimpsed but momentarily
through a blur
they loosely call reality
with a cry to the most high
through a clear blue sky
“Why are you hiding from me?”
Up a mystical sleeve
the eye to deceive
the mind to believe
at lightening speed
shuffling the deck
down mirrors of smoke
whilst smoking the rope
of lost faith and no hope
ever stroking the snake
that lies in wait
at the bottom of the pack
My chips all in
at Club 27 ♣️
snake eyes on the prize
for one last spin
unclenching
the hand of fate
holding fast
to a royal flush
up against a full house
of madness and regret
as the Ancients forsaken
covered my bet
with a forbidden blessing
that broke the bank
(it was one hell of a gamble)
The croupier got tossed
leaving the pit boss
with just a worn-out slogan
on his forked tongue
“No place closer to heaven
. . . than Club 27 ♣️”
yet still …
the barbarians
at the casino gates
counting the cost
of losses spiritual
wept and grieved
with sorrow deep
my winnings to retrieve
from a burnt out soul
laid fallow
in the ruins of tomorrow
revealing the dealing
and illuminating
with clarity
the nefarious cruelty
that denies
with sugar coated lies
and bets on the side
the sure thing
of a higher reality
As the King of Hearts
the Ace of Time and Space ♦️
keeps on asking the Jokers Wild
“Why are you hiding from me?”
~ David B. Redpath © 2018-2022
Artwork;
‘The Golden Rush’
~ by David B. Redpath © 2018 – 2022
From Europa …
. . . to Malacca.
Photography;
Stefan I. Redpath © 2020 – 2022
A chip off the old engine block 😎
Your sleight of hand leaves me awed, David.
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I do have an Ace up my sleeve,
but you don’t count your winnings
while your sitting at life’s table.
Thanks for cutting the deck, Putnam.
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I always knew you had an ace up your sleeve and it is a crying shame that we can’t leave the table with our winnings!
Ah! You are welcome David, it was an honour.
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As the song goes …
“There’ll be time
enough for counting
when the dealings done”.
Thanks again, Punam.
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Indeed, just before one ascends the stairway to heaven!
My pleasure, David.
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So you’ve gone from the Wasp to the Sting (a la Newman and Redford).
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My dealing days
are done, Chris.
For I never knew
when to hold ’em,
nor when to fold ’em.
After that last flop,
at the House
of the Rising Sun,
I’m on the turn
down fourth street
past the steamboats
at the cotton docks,
to that long and winding
Mississippi river
Forever to be ‘All In’.
Never again to be
the unlucky as sin
lonesome loser.
Just another
rambling gambler.
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Indeed! Breaking the heart of the King of Hearts.
Always so clever!
Love the art too, of the picture kind I mean 🤓
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“But how do you mend
a broken heart … ?”
Thanks for that, Vanessa.
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Oh my gosh David, I didn’t expect to end up with the Bee Gees in my head 😊It’s been ages!
Big question. Is God’s heart ever mended? Christ carries His scars of love into eternity… 🤔
and promises to wipe every tear, that they will be no more. Profound is an understatement.
And you’re very welcome. Thanks for your thought provoking words!
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Well, God is Love.
He is jealous for us
… and Jesus wept.
Man has managed,
all on his own, to go
down a desolate road.
I see God as the
prodigal’s father,
with Jesus as the
good shepherd
seeking the lost sheep.
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I agree! And see the same!
And He’s our prodigal Father over and over, running to meet us. (Or seeking us lost when we stray, gently carrying us.) I so love those images, It so moves me. The reunion, the feasting, the mending of broken hearts 😊💚
And the Bridegroom, loving and serving humbly to the point of death. Gah! There’s a richness there we could never get to the end of.
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And a divine simplicity,
that confounds those who
are wise in their own eyes.
I guess you need an ear 👂
. . . to hear?
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Yes!!
(And to lean in to hear over that shrillness of the world 🕺🏻(Random but one of my current favourite emojis lol)
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PS also love “ancients of FOMO grieve”!!
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Vanessa, you’ve actually
pinpointed the one line
that I can honestly claim.
The rest seemed to come
from another time & place.
Perhaps even a ‘susurration’?
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Sorry I missed this interesting comment.
This morning I really felt the need to shut some voices out, and the contrast between the Shalom voice of God’s word, with the shrill sounds of the world really struck me.
I’m intrigued you feel you can’t take credit for this, maybe your heart was prompted? But I give you credit for the crafting 😁
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I take full responsibility,
yet I do ask myself often,
“Where did that come from?”.
Thanks Victoria.
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I can so relate!
Hahaha you are welcome David.
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Nothing…cross my heart…
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Yes, best to stay transparent
… if you wish to be seen.
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Transparency always works.
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But perhaps Harry Potter’s
Cloak of Invisibility is step
too far … possibly?
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I’d gladly disappear like that sometimes.
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I had a good look down
Diagon Alley when I was in
Edinburgh, but they were all sold out of Invisibility Cloaks. Sorry Bojana.
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Shoot. We need to keep searching, though.
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Beautiful painting and poem… love it!
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Thank you very, Jason.
And thanks for popping in.
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Striking art…loved it…such a deep poem … I am awed and inspired by all your posts… thank you for creating and sharing…
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Thank you, Geetika,
for all your appreciation.
With it, I get much
positive satisfaction.
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welcome…most deserving…my pleasure…
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Slipstream.
Perfect
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To the Queen
of the Poetic Slipstream,
from the bottom of my heart,
thank you for reading
my dream, and perusing
my humble art.
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I always like the flow and glow
of your poems, David, plus the
double rhymes so many times
creating lovely musicality,
personality and real quality,
just a slight reminiscence
of the Beat poets once more
though you opened a new door
to your personal style in a while
with beautiful artwork beside
that comes from the very inside.
So happy you let us all be part
of what comes from the inner heart,
from your inspiration and creation.
Thank you for sharing your art.
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Thank you very much, Marta.
I do try to go with the flow from
that inner stream of what you,
doubtless and dauntless,
know what you know.
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Up a mystical sleeve
the eye to deceive
the mind to believe- 🎉yes. This association!
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Yes Luiza, I’m a daydream
believer, but always on guard
in regard to the deceiver.
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Now just a short question. Do you have any objections to being in my Lola blogs? I once asked Tara Caribou if she objected to me writing about Alaska, but she said it was big enough for me too! I hope Australia, the Hebel Hotel and a certain maker of Red Skies feels the same way as well?
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“If everything isn’t black
and white, I say, Why the
hell not?” ~ John Wayne
No problemo amigo.
As the Duke would say …
This town is big enough for
the both of us, and Lola too
… of course.
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The blur of humanity – how true. You’re definitely a gifted graphic artist. Very nice design.
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We do tend to fudge things.
Thank you very much, JT.
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No doubt there is much up his sleeve…
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An entire Universe, I believe.
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With perhaps connections to the ones beyond… n’est pas?
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Oui, très assurément.
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Have you read Stef Mo? Your style of writing always takes me to his book Panic! That and Leonard Cohen. Forgive me for commenting only on the structure. Your content is brilliant but just saying that wouldn’t really give a comment depth.
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I am very happy with that comparison, Nitin.
Stef Mo is brilliant, with a
style reminiscent of my old friend, John Cooper Clarke,
the Punk Poet. I was raised
on the songs of Leonard Cohen
and Bob Dylan, and the works
of the beat poets. I guess it
seeps into your veins.
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Beautifully crafted ❣️
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Thank you very much, Lesego.
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Amazing. Videos also👍🏻
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Thank you very much, Parneet 🙏
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Oh!!! Love this, querido Mr. Redpath! Are you a bit of a seer love?
So talented you are. Love the artwork in combination with the poem
and the bits of Europe. Especially resonated with your lines
“a world of mindless cruelty
and heartless disparity
that denies
with sugar coated lies
the Diamond reality”
That´s exactly how I feel it, too…
Sigh. Thank you for this, de corazon!! And isn´t the Sagrada Familia, well,
sagrada? I was lucky to have enough spaciousness around me
when I visited last, to really get a glimpse of its all-encompassing
magnificence… Gracias! Muchos besotes desde Andalucia to Aussieland :)Cuidate mucho 💖🙏✨✨✨
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“If I speak in the tongues of men
or of angels, but do not have love,
I am only a resounding gong or a
clanging cymbal.”
~ Paul of Tarsus
“Fear is the path to the dark side.
Fear leads to anger. Anger leads
to hate. Hate leads to suffering.”
~ Yoda of Dagobah
“Do not be afraid of the terrors
of the night, nor the arrow that
flies in the day.”
~ King David
Thank you right royally, Queen Gypsy.
You inspired me to update this piece
with a bit of a rewrite. I hope you like.
Wherever your may roam,
the King of Hearts ❤️
watches over your path.
As for the pestilence of night 🌃 🌕
… this too shall pass 😎
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LOVED this, thanks so much Mr. Redpath! This REALLY soothed my soul big time… Big big hug and much love from me ❤️❤️ And yes… this too shall pass… thank you ❤️
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Slick deal, diamond jack, duces wild, still the same, nothing takes a royal flush in all in! 🤠🤑
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… somewhere in the darkness
the gambler he broke even 😥
But in his final words
I found an ace that I could keep ♦️
🎶You’ve got to know
when to hold ’em
Know when to fold ’em
Know when to walk away
And know when to run
You never count your money
When you’re sittin’ at the table
There’ll be time enough for countin’
When the dealin’s done 🎶 😎
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Wonder if Kenny was a gambling man 🤔
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I’d have to ask him, but Kenny is
in self isolation back on the farm
since Ruby took her love to town 💔
“Oh Ruby, for God’s sake, turn around” 😥
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Sadly Kenny has no more memory of that. 😥
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Yes … Rest in peace
Kenny McCormick ✝️ 😭
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This is amazing
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Thanks for reading, Jude 🙏
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It’s beautiful, David. You are the king of our hearts.
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Thank you regally, fair Athena 👑
‘Tis like a hot shot of chocolate milk
to hear from you, Basilike. I do trust
you are keeping it all together, there
in Neo-Classical Athens 🙏
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LOVED revisiting this! I’d forgotten parts and am walking away with a HUGE smile!!! Thank You and Cheers! 🙂
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Thanks for the Royal visitation, Katy.
You are alway welcome back to cut
the deck of my poetry ❤️♠️♦️♣️ 😎
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Ahhhh! That ROCKS!!! My pleasure and YAY! 😅🌀🤗
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Damn! This is grand
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Merci beaucoup, Lily 💛
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Wonderful and profound poem, David. 🙂
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Thank you verily, Chris 🙏 😎
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Excellent work
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Thank you exceedingly, D.A. 🙏
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You are most welcome
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Mind-blowing? Can I say it too often?
I feel like I do. But I am awed at the art of you. 🙏☀️
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Thank you awesomely, Lia 🙏
Welcome back to the land of
bloggery 😎 I was just writing
something you might like . . .
Hearts turned on
Hearts switched off
Hearts that are hungry
Hearts that stay soft
Hearts getting hard
Hearts that stray
Hearts of innocence
that just love to play
Hearts way too heavy
Time to throw stuff away
Hearts that get betrayed
and freeze up inside
Hearts that lose the way
A walk on the wild side
Hearts making a choice
Hearts taken for a ride
Hearts that rejoice
and turn back the tide
~ David B. Redpath
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What a joy to see this, David
So tuned in to this energy,
And hearts that crave it
Such a perfect poem
For a nearing-spring morn
In it I sense the tides are reborn
I was writing something too
Perhaps we’re all on some big blue
Sea of love connecting 🌀🌊♾
With open hearts of truth. 💛🔆
My, you’re talented, strewth. 😎😇
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Floating upon collective waves
of cosmic conciousness 🌊🙃 ☔💟
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Excellent. I really like it.
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Zeer gewaardeerd, Rabirius.
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So well put, David. God extends His hand, yet we see Him not. May He keep you safe during this health crisis. ❤
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Thank you, Anna 💛 You too 🙏
And yes, He is with us … always ✝️
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much to unpack here, David, and I have only just begun — as The Carpenters might say —but I enjoyed the mesmeric images, the gambling references and that haunting/desperate refrain, why are you hiding from me?
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Let the cards fall where they may.
At least for today, a kiss for luck
and we’re on our way 🎶🍀 😊
Yes, spanning the height, depth,
and breadth of the heart is a life
long pursuit. Thanks John for
taking the time for a peek at what
I’ve only just begun.
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‘I saw the crescent/ you saw the whole of the moon’
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Now that you mention it, John,
… I did wander out in the world
for years. But I do trust you didn’t
just stay in your room 😎
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no, David, I didn’t. I did my share of wandering: Asia, America, Vienna, Prague —but there came a time when I didn’t feel the need to travel; however it looks like many of us will be spending considerable time in our rooms anytime soon 🙂 😦
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With a good stockpile of books,
self isolation could be many a
splendored thing 🎶
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Most beautifully written with amazing photos,dearRedpath!!
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Very gratified that you liked, Aruna 💖
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You are most welcome,dear Redpath!!🌷
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Winding and weaving…..a labyrinth of delectable word candy. I love this so much. 🥰
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A most regal 👑 thank you,
Queen Kara 💛 😎
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😘
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Acey Deucey all the way: accept when you loss it all on an Ace high and an Ace low!
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When the game is ending,
that’s the time
to count you losses,
and your winnings ⬆️🤑⬇️
From way on high, I’m sure
Kenny Rogers is grinning 😁
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Excellent words and videos
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Thanks Hal.
It’s a family joint venture 👪
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